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2023-02-19 23:03

Not a bad start I will really have to wait for more chapters to really give it a true review. I do like the premise and the gifts the MC has are not bad at all though it does depend on how intelligent and educated the MC is to tell if I'm going to really like this story premise though. I do have my small doubts mostly because I have a very bad opinion of Daenerys Targaryen after she tried to start trying to be a ruler. In my opinion after she started trying to rule slaver's Bay her character took a real nosedive from being an incompetent ruler then a I know best ruler to finally mad

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Yea mad queen being rehabilitated so to speak by growing up again with a loving mom will help smooth out that edge she sharpened, at least that's my intention. She doesn't have the weight of her whole dynasty placed on her shoulders and can breathe a little bit so she will be a bit different after some time.

Torhelm
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Are you going to pair MC and Daenerys?

Pretending_Author:Yea mad queen being rehabilitated so to speak by growing up again with a loving mom will help smooth out that edge she sharpened, at least that's my intention. She doesn't have the weight of her whole dynasty placed on her shoulders and can breathe a little bit so she will be a bit different after some time.
Pretending_Author
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I am still unsure of the pairings in this, the MC is going to be living his best life so it is up in the air who he will actually marry. He is the 'Son of the unworthy' after all. There might be an engagement between the two of them for 'plot' reasons that involve chapter 3 and chapter 4 which I am still writing.

Torhelm:Are you going to pair MC and Daenerys?
anubis1650
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I'll be honest with you I'm still kind of wondering what kind of MC you're going to be going forward with given the fact that we did not get much of his background what I mean by that is is he going to try to introduce new technologies or methods because if the guy paid attention in high school he should have a rather decent advantage in knowing stuff that could probably uplift Westeros but like I said we don't know his educational background if he went to college and where he grew up say for instance if he grew up in a farming community he'd know a thing or two about farming techniques was he possible a Wikipedia Junkie or are you not going to be doing that much World building?

Pretending_Author:Yea mad queen being rehabilitated so to speak by growing up again with a loving mom will help smooth out that edge she sharpened, at least that's my intention. She doesn't have the weight of her whole dynasty placed on her shoulders and can breathe a little bit so she will be a bit different after some time.
Pretending_Author
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To be honest I am going with the flow for this fic since its mainly for fun and to get my fingers typing when I cant find words on my other fic. He might bring in some game changing things or he might leave them out to not upset the balance the world has had for 8000 years...

anubis1650:I'll be honest with you I'm still kind of wondering what kind of MC you're going to be going forward with given the fact that we did not get much of his background what I mean by that is is he going to try to introduce new technologies or methods because if the guy paid attention in high school he should have a rather decent advantage in knowing stuff that could probably uplift Westeros but like I said we don't know his educational background if he went to college and where he grew up say for instance if he grew up in a farming community he'd know a thing or two about farming techniques was he possible a Wikipedia Junkie or are you not going to be doing that much World building?
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