Please don't screw up this novel It was good up until the part the MC becomes emotional and rose and MC weird and awkward scenesDon't make the MC and emotional idiot I understand he has to deal with his darkness but don't make it too weird and crazy. Make him a tiny bit emotionless and get him to be angry at Rose and her family for restricting his freedom. Get him to tell her to leave him alone or for him to strong arm her father into giving him some space(I mean he's a transmigrator so he knows some info get him to properly use it for his advantage) I know he should use the light and not just be in the shadow but don't make him fully come out into the light keep the majority of his actions un the shadowsand for gods sake make him a bit smarter to be a tiny step ahead of everything and everyone I really hope you take my suggestions into consideration because this novel has potential
Gurdon
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LIKEyoo, uh i did change it a bit and stopped bcuz of my studies. Pretty sure il pick it soon, just check it in a min il change the title back to normal k?
Ireallylikereading:bro i checked your works but didnt find anything like that, your original works doesnt have a universal war novel/manga/fanfic in it. i cant help if theres no way to
bro i checked your works but didnt find anything like that, your original works doesnt have a universal war novel/manga/fanfic in it. i cant help if theres no way to
Supreme_Slaughter:Please try my new novel Universal War ( There might be only three chapters but please help me point out and would love if you could leave a review)
Ireallylikereading:bro i checked your works but didnt find anything like that, your original works doesnt have a universal war novel/manga/fanfic in it. i cant help if theres no way to