Khaled_Azzam

Amazing work. This is such a fun and interesting fanfic. it's really enjoyable and unique. The only thing I have to say is that I hope you can upload more frequently. Thanks for such an awesome fanfic

oh come one, which self respecting wizard especially a pureblood adult not a child but an adult will agree to fight 10 against 1 and against a child no less. If they had fought one on one then realising he's too powerful and then doing a 10 v 1 it'll be more believable and even that is stupid just do a 1 v 1 doing a 10 vs 1 doesn't make him more macho it just shows he's arrogant and stupid to show off alot of his power. It makes him appear like those typical generic MCs when he had the potential to be much more this story is being ruined by stuff like these.

Okay I was enjoying this story quite alot but this is becoming shit the more it goes on. Its as if I'm reading a full chinese Cultivation novel. I half expect he's going to tell him to call Alex father. Come on you can do better much better, please don't ruin this story.

This story has alot of potential to be great but it's too disorganised and makes no sense. One moment the story is heading in a direction then then the other its heading into a completely different story. Stuff that seem important and Critical gets forgotten about after a couple chapter and something new comes to replace for it to be forgotten again. The MC is too emotional and makes no sense, he can defeat a top general of Grindelwald but is struggling against muggles, everything feels forced, doesn't flow naturally and makes no sense. It has potential but it needs to be rewritten with a clear story in mind not chaos

OMGG I CANT WAITT I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTERR I hope Watson joins them on the adventure and they do it together

I agree Daphne would be the most fitting female lead in this fanfic. And Plz for the love of God don't make it a harem, Since in most cases it ruins the story(unless its done right which it rarely does).

I have to disagree with you there. I think the character of Daphne that you wrote is great, sure it could be better but it's much better than many fanfics that I've seen. I Personally don't think you need to edit the last chapters just change her a bit moving forward and it'd be alright. But perhaps there's something I'm not seeing. Anyways, do what you feel is right for the story, as its still one of my favourites. Though I hope for more updates 😅.

This is one of the best fanfiction ever. I know you're doing it for fun and not following a strict schedule in uploading. But I hope that you continue this fanfic till the end and upload a bit more consistently, because this fanfiction really deserves more chapters. Thank you so much for producing such amazing work❤.

I will not go into specific story details to avoid spoilers but these are my thoughts. This is a great novel/fanfic. The MCs character is a bit dark but super interesting . And the Wizerding world characters are interesting and kind of similar to the source books. I've seen some Harry Potter fan fiction that depict Harry potter either as an evil asshole or subservient servant or as an extremely forgettable side character but its not that case in this fanfic its actually close to harrys character in the books. Moreover, this is one of the few fanics in which the MC doesn't know the entire plot of HP but knows enough that its still interesting and sometimes better than knowing the entire plot. The new characters and side of the wizerding world that appears here is amazing and interesting. There is a bit of forced mystery that appears here which makes it kind of frustrating. Now I don't have an issue with there being a mystery it makes the story interesting but sometimes the mystery is a but forced thus frustrating the reader. Overall, I love this novel and I hope it continues for a long time. Big thanks to the author for such an amazing fanfic.

This is a great novel with alot of potential, the MC actions and character are enjoyable to read. Moreover, the interaction with other characters is interesting, though the system may not be my favourite type but its still great and offers alot of adventure and fun. I hope you can continue with this fanfic and take it to heights that it can reach. Thank you Author for what you've published till now❤.