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2023-03-10 11:05

This is the review I wrote after finishing chapter 1: The plot is slow, but it keeps you intrigued. The emotions, story building, suspense, and the revelation at the end were all superb! I hope the author keeps up the good work.

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Sushishy
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Hi, my name is Sushishy, and I apologize for the delayed introduction. I would like to share my story with you all and hope that you enjoy it. First and foremost, I would like to specify the central theme of this story. This particular story is an intriguing blend of two distinct elements - the gritty realism of the real world, and the wondrous fantasy of a fictional realm. Set in a world that is both familiar and alien, this dark fantasy series explores the intricacies of a universe that is both magical and dangerous. At its core, this tale is a reflection of our own world, albeit one that is twisted and corrupted by the presence of magic and otherworldly beings. In this universe, we see the same struggles that we see in our own lives - the quest for power, the search for identity, and the battle against our own inner demons. However, these challenges are magnified in this fantastical realm, where the stakes are higher, and the consequences are more severe. At the same time, the story also immerses us in a world that is filled with wonder and enchantment. From majestic dragons soaring through the skies to wizards casting spells that defy the laws of physics, this universe is a place where anything is possible. Every corner of this realm is imbued with a sense of magic, and there is always a sense of adventure lurking just beyond the horizon. The combination of these two elements creates a unique narrative that is both captivating and immersive. It is a story that combines the raw realism of our own world with the imaginative wonder of a fictional realm, creating a tapestry of darkness and light, of hope and despair, and of triumph and tragedy. As we follow the protagonist, Leon Asura, on his journey to discover his place in this world, we are drawn into a tale that is at once thrilling and heartbreaking. We watch as he struggles to overcome his own limitations and rise to the challenge of the cataclysmic events that threaten to consume his world. And through his eyes, we gain a deeper understanding of the intricate web of magic and intrigue that lies at the heart of this universe. In short, this story is a unique and enthralling fusion of two seemingly disparate elements - the harsh reality of our own world and the fantastic wonder of a fictional realm. It is a tale that will capture your imagination and leave you eagerly anticipating the next chapter. I created this story purely for my own satisfaction, without any intention of sharing it with others initially. However, I would be grateful if someone did take the time to read it. Although I had created the story a year ago, I ended up deleting it because I lacked the necessary skills to write a compelling tale at that time. I eventually published the first chapter on webnovel, but my academic commitments forced me to discontinue the series. The uniqueness of this story lies in its departure from the isekai genre, which typically features protagonists being transported to a fantasy world. It is not a power-fantasy series, as one might assume. Instead, it delves into the horror and realism of a world that defies logic and reason, where even the most fantastical elements are tinged with darkness. The story is a reminder that a fantasy world can be just as brutal and unforgiving as our own. It takes the reader on a journey that strips away the veneer of magic and enchantment, exposing the harsh realities that lie beneath. This is a world where nothing is guaranteed, and even the most powerful beings can be struck down by a single blow. It is a world that demands respect, not just from its inhabitants but from its readers as well. I would appreciate it if you could read my story, and I would be grateful fo any constructive criticism you can provide. That's all I wanted to share with you all. Ciao!

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