webnovel
kindred_77
kindred_77Lv11yr
2023-03-04 23:14

After reading 15 chapters of the story, I was impressed with how much the plot had advanced. What stood out to me was the author's ability to move the story forward without resorting to repetitive content simply to lengthen the story. This is a great indication that the story has a lot of potential and is worth investing in. It shows that the author is skilled at crafting a narrative that is engaging and moves at a good pace. I sincerely hope that the author will continue to write this story. I believe that as more chapters are released, I will become more invested in the characters and the plot. I look forward to seeing how the story develops further in the future. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Liked by 1 people

LIKE
Replies1
Sushishy
SushishyAuthor

Thank you for taking the time to read my story. Despite facing difficulties in my engineering course, I am determined to continue writing and developing this story. I am grateful for your encouragement and support, and it motivates me to keep going. Rest assured that I will strive to maintain the same level of quality and progress in the upcoming chapters. I am excited to share more of the story and its characters with you, and I hope that you will enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it. Thank you again for your kind words, and I look forward to sharing more of my work with you in the future.

Other Reviews
Sushishy
SushishyAuthor

Hi, my name is Sushishy, and I apologize for the delayed introduction. I would like to share my story with you all and hope that you enjoy it. First and foremost, I would like to specify the central theme of this story. This particular story is an intriguing blend of two distinct elements - the gritty realism of the real world, and the wondrous fantasy of a fictional realm. Set in a world that is both familiar and alien, this dark fantasy series explores the intricacies of a universe that is both magical and dangerous. At its core, this tale is a reflection of our own world, albeit one that is twisted and corrupted by the presence of magic and otherworldly beings. In this universe, we see the same struggles that we see in our own lives - the quest for power, the search for identity, and the battle against our own inner demons. However, these challenges are magnified in this fantastical realm, where the stakes are higher, and the consequences are more severe. At the same time, the story also immerses us in a world that is filled with wonder and enchantment. From majestic dragons soaring through the skies to wizards casting spells that defy the laws of physics, this universe is a place where anything is possible. Every corner of this realm is imbued with a sense of magic, and there is always a sense of adventure lurking just beyond the horizon. The combination of these two elements creates a unique narrative that is both captivating and immersive. It is a story that combines the raw realism of our own world with the imaginative wonder of a fictional realm, creating a tapestry of darkness and light, of hope and despair, and of triumph and tragedy. As we follow the protagonist, Leon Asura, on his journey to discover his place in this world, we are drawn into a tale that is at once thrilling and heartbreaking. We watch as he struggles to overcome his own limitations and rise to the challenge of the cataclysmic events that threaten to consume his world. And through his eyes, we gain a deeper understanding of the intricate web of magic and intrigue that lies at the heart of this universe. In short, this story is a unique and enthralling fusion of two seemingly disparate elements - the harsh reality of our own world and the fantastic wonder of a fictional realm. It is a tale that will capture your imagination and leave you eagerly anticipating the next chapter. I created this story purely for my own satisfaction, without any intention of sharing it with others initially. However, I would be grateful if someone did take the time to read it. Although I had created the story a year ago, I ended up deleting it because I lacked the necessary skills to write a compelling tale at that time. I eventually published the first chapter on webnovel, but my academic commitments forced me to discontinue the series. The uniqueness of this story lies in its departure from the isekai genre, which typically features protagonists being transported to a fantasy world. It is not a power-fantasy series, as one might assume. Instead, it delves into the horror and realism of a world that defies logic and reason, where even the most fantastical elements are tinged with darkness. The story is a reminder that a fantasy world can be just as brutal and unforgiving as our own. It takes the reader on a journey that strips away the veneer of magic and enchantment, exposing the harsh realities that lie beneath. This is a world where nothing is guaranteed, and even the most powerful beings can be struck down by a single blow. It is a world that demands respect, not just from its inhabitants but from its readers as well. I would appreciate it if you could read my story, and I would be grateful fo any constructive criticism you can provide. That's all I wanted to share with you all. Ciao!

Related Stories

Hero of Darkness

Elric's life had been nothing short of a nightmare since his childhood. He was constantly bullied at school, detested and ignored by his family, and left with nobody to care whether he lived or died. The accumulated loneliness and suffering from decades pushed him into a severe depression, and he ultimately decided to take his life’s final decision… Suicide. One day, Elric's soul heard a voice calling out to him. "Wake up, Elric. I am the God of Darkness, and I'm here to give you another chance at life." To the God of Darkness, Elric replied with only two words… "Fuck off!" Now forced with the possibility of a new life despite his unwillingness… Elric must decide whether to become a puppet or forge a new destiny with his own hands. Will he overcome his traumatic past, or will he squander yet another chance at life? Join the Protagonist on his journey as he is given an impossible task while striving to become one of the strongest beings in a world full of Magic, Mythical creatures, Dragons, and Gods. ---------------- [[Author : The protagonist of this story is a scheming mastermind who doesn't trust anyone and plans everything based on his present strength, knowledge and circumstances. No Romance, Harem, or Fan-service here. The main character is also not an Edgelord or a Psychopath who kills people without reason. Character development is a gradual process as the Main Character learns to acknowledge and overcome his flaws. This is a story for those who appreciate a psychologically well-developed character. The protagonist is an Antihero character who exists in the gray area between good and evil. This is a story for those who enjoy complex characters, greatly improving and expanding World-building along with intricate plots. If you are looking for a story with a nuanced and morally ambiguous yet humorous protagonist in a mature and gritty world, then this is the novel for you.]] ---------------- Note : Character Reference Arts available in chapter comments. Discord Link : https://discord.gg/xR7vUzCYx9 ---------------- Note : Vote for the Novel for extra weekly chapters. 500 Power Stones = 1 Extra Chapter per week 1000 Power Stones = 2 Extra Chapters per week 2500 Power Stones = 5 Extra chapters per week 500 Golden Tickets = 2 Extra chapters per week 1000 Golden Tickets = 3 Extra chapters per week 1500 Golden Tickets = 7 Extra chapters per week

CrimsonWolfAuthor · Fantasy
4.7
1102 Chs