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Kage_n0_Ou
Kage_n0_OuLv32yr
2023-03-03 22:35

I don't understand at all what the rest of you in the reviews are talking about with such high ratings. But for the high ratings, I wouldn't have read this and you guys lied lol. It made me wonder if we read the same novel. The MC is supposed to be an author who ended up in his novel as the 5 year old older brother of the protagonist. The MC doesn't act at all like someone who transmigrated. He barely remembers the plot of the novel but even with the things he remembers, he doesn't use that information for anything. He remembers Jack is a creepy and ambitious person but decides to hand over his brother who's still a baby to him. Jack asks him to come with him to see his brother and tho he knows that Jack is suspicious, he goes with him. Why would you do that when the person's mere gaze makes you shiver and makes you afraid? He ends up getting injured but doesn't tell the adventurer lady that became his guardian. Like bro, what? The MC gets sent to an adventurer academy and is taken to a dungeon THO HES STILL 5! It's not like he has any special abilities or talents; no matter how you look at it, he's just a more mature kid. Yet they sent him there and he almost died. Overall the plot is just too bland.

Surviving as the Second Main Lead: Second Lead's POV

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PrinceOfNilfheim
PrinceOfNilfheimLv5

I agree, I would have appreciated it more if the author just scraps the whole transmigration part out.

2yr
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burninglamp
burninglampLv4

not just that after almost dying due to faults of the teacher, dungeon operator and teammates, he, a 5yr old forced to be a suicide bomber ( they literally strap a bomb to him) and monster bait, he is scolded by the "kind" nurse for being admitted to hospital?( this is a cliche,one that should never be used in this case) and then rebooked for going to a dangerous dungeon by the same guy who sent him there.

1yr
4
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SugarApostle
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Rafael_Loki
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