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Surcres
SurcresLv51yr
2023-03-05 20:56

Good story so far, honestly I have never seen this plot in another fic, those who say that this is a copy from somewhere, seriously I would like them to tell me where it is from Author, you should delete the reviews that only say that it has been copied from somewhere else, if they do not have any proof to prove their argument, they are just meaningless complaints

What do you mean Kaguya is inside Me?!

ReeeeNejiii
3.9
47 Chs

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TheAngels
TheAngelsLv2

What's the FF timeline?

1yr
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DRAVIDIAN
DRAVIDIANLv11

People are saying that this isnt original but nah I love it even this early on. Great MC, heroic but not self sacrificing, cares about his life and loved one over strangers. Good side character exposition, all of them act as you would believe. Interesting concept with Kaguya! Never seen that before. All in all, I really like it, this is one of the first naruto fics I’ve read but even then I am sure this is of an above average quality at the very least. Also it ignores Sakura as a love interest so that is always a plus!

1yr

ReeeeNejiii
ReeeeNejiiiAuthor

Mandatory Shameless 5* Review! This is my first Novel I hope you all can enjoy it and tell me what I need to improve! thank you! I also hope that I can make this last and fun!

1yr
InternetSaint
InternetSaintLv1

Zero originality. The author is a movie/fanfic addict who has a general idea what story he wants to write, but in the execution he is just randomly copying stuff from different stores and movies and in a very cringe way.

1yr
GhostAKilla
GhostAKillaLv14

This story is just all over the place bro I don't even know what is happening it you copied some stuff in in some chapters bro come on it had good potential but this is just bad to me

1yr
O_Mysery
O_MyseryLv2

Mehhh. A little copy from here and there plus your knowledge from movies. Not a good read at all. Take some time and read your own fic from the beginning. You will get what's wrong with this fic.

1yr
Random_Omnipotent
Random_OmnipotentLv4

so far so good 👍👍👍 . Btw is this going to be harem?

1yr
NeoBee
NeoBeeLv6

I saw a some reviews claiming that this is a copy of another FF But the thing is, none of them actually answer when asked what FF it copied from 🤦🤦🤦

1yr
Carbon_6597
Carbon_6597Lv14

meh, author made MC super op and then completely made him stick to original time line. he could stop Sasuke running away in less then a minute but he "let's him go" purely because the author doesn't have any creativity to change stuff. literally its just Naruto but everyone has the intelligence of Naruto including MC

1yr
Celleborn
CellebornLv2

I am liking this fic, It's about a very OP MC, OP like he can fight a Jonin at age of 7 and every year he gain new powers from "his mom". If I were to criticize something in this fic would be the dialogs, they almost always seems kinda rush, like the author knows where he want the interaction to end so the characters just lead each other to that ending, don't kwon if I am making sense. I am no writer, but I think it would be a lot better if the author took a little more time with the dialogs.

1yr
Wolf_Savage_9952
Wolf_Savage_9952Lv4

I have nothing to say other than this book is sooooo nice

1yr
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