Item: What do you mean Kaguya is inside Me?!
Rating: 2
Author: O_Mysery

O_MyseryLv21yr

2023-02-20 17:46

Mehhh. A little copy from here and there plus your knowledge from movies. Not a good read at all. Take some time and read your own fic from the beginning. You will get what's wrong with this fic.

What do you mean Kaguya is inside Me?!

ReeeeNejiii

3.9

47 Chs

Liked by 13 people

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ReeeeNejiiiAuthor

May I know which fics did I copy from? I don't read that much fics I'm not aware of it, and while I may not have the best knowledge I do know and double check everything from the wiki and data books as well as from the manga that i usually double read as well

1yr

Krizzle08Lv4

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ReeeeNejiii:May I know which fics did I copy from? I don't read that much fics I'm not aware of it, and while I may not have the best knowledge I do know and double check everything from the wiki and data books as well as from the manga that i usually double read as well

1yr

BreezyNovelsLv5

Whose the romantic interest?

ReeeeNejiii:May I know which fics did I copy from? I don't read that much fics I'm not aware of it, and while I may not have the best knowledge I do know and double check everything from the wiki and data books as well as from the manga that i usually double read as well

1yr

iiuminoxLv4

Kaguya if ur actually serious and not trolling

BreezyNovels:Whose the romantic interest?

1yr

JustHavinFunReadinLv11

Did you actually read it, or are you just stupidly assuming? Because the title of the first chapter implies, that he sees Kaguya as his mother.

iiuminox:Kaguya if ur actually serious and not trolling
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1yr

iiuminoxLv4

🫣

JustHavinFunReadin:Did you actually read it, or are you just stupidly assuming? Because the title of the first chapter implies, that he sees Kaguya as his mother.

1yr

JustHavinFunReadinLv11

Yeah, I just read that part. Still not sure if she will actually be the FL, but it's very much possible.

iiuminox:🫣
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