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Straggler
StragglerLv11yr
2023-10-23 04:57

This translation was difficult to read and it seems a lot of world building information is left out. It reads as if it should be a manhua to fill in the blanks. There aren’t very good descriptions of what’s happening. The concept of the storyline is interesting, so if the writing improved it would be much better.

I'm So Lucky

Bean Paste Huahua
4.2
40 Chs

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systemwriterK
systemwriterKLv13

bro you just started with webnovel (lvl1) this is one of the best really, what world building ? we will know as it goes on it is just the beginning and it s useless to put useless descriptions. every book with high level world building is rare. at least put 4stars xD too harsh if you don t like it go to romance section and you will like useless world building so the mc feels above the world. it is just a translation so go to the one who wrote it and let us have fun with a good system :) ty

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systemwriterK
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