Review Detail of Yukina_Miu in We Die Young

A very gripping hook. From the first chapter, better said from the first couple of paragraphs I was hooked on the story, and not to mention the action. I don't know your background sir, but that's some very detailed and knowledgable information about combat, I'm very impressed. The story starts of very dark and throws you into this harsh unforgiving world, setting up what you can expect coming. From what I read up until now, this is a story you can't accuse of moving too fast or too slow, it's very nicely paced and well constructed. A lot of thought and energy went into it and I love seeing that.Can't wait to read the rest of it because sir, you have yourself a new fan.