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pantserplotter
pantserplotterLv31mth
2024-10-01 18:56

Rereading this again, it was by far so far so good. Emotions reflected well and I was emotional a bit and pitied the MC. A very dramatic plot and mixed with System and plot progression. Good read perfect to pass time 😊

Celestial Conquest: I, A Fallen Angel, Shall Slay The Divine!

Demigod_of_All
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Demigod_of_All
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Thanks a lot, bro!

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Demigod_of_All
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Aight, from my perspective, it's good. If you have any queries, then go ahead and ask here. Although it would be better if you comment and ask in paragraph comments or chapter comments, again it's up to you guys.Have a nice day!

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This novel has a great story, and it's also filled with lots of potential. I've only read a few chapters at the time of this review, but I can tell it's a promising villain story. While the grammar isn't perfect, the story is still easy to read and understand. But the author still needs to improve the grammar, as there are a few errors in it, but nothing too much. Looking forward to reading more chapters!

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Pretty good novel. Nothing too wrong with the plot progression or the character design, which is something I tend to focus a lot more on compared to grammar. Btw, grammar is also fine, nothing that will break immersion so all good in the department. Keep up the great work author!

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