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Gladstone_Lv141yr
2023-10-25 12:15

This novel has a great story, and it's also filled with lots of potential. I've only read a few chapters at the time of this review, but I can tell it's a promising villain story. While the grammar isn't perfect, the story is still easy to read and understand. But the author still needs to improve the grammar, as there are a few errors in it, but nothing too much. Looking forward to reading more chapters!

Celestial Conquest: I, A Fallen Angel, Shall Slay The Divine!

Demigod_of_All
4.9
64 Chs

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Demigod_of_All
Demigod_of_AllAuthor

Aight, from my perspective, it's good. If you have any queries, then go ahead and ask here. Although it would be better if you comment and ask in paragraph comments or chapter comments, again it's up to you guys.Have a nice day!

1yr

Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusLv4

Pretty good novel. Nothing too wrong with the plot progression or the character design, which is something I tend to focus a lot more on compared to grammar. Btw, grammar is also fine, nothing that will break immersion so all good in the department. Keep up the great work author!

1yr
SpritVoidWolf
SpritVoidWolfLv3

Aight, not going to lie. This is a pretty good novel, So far. I haven't seen major issues with grammar or the character design, I can't say much about the world background or story development. Since the story only has 5 chapters until now, but overall, this is a pretty good novel.I'd recommend this novel to others.

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ProgressingDaily
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pantserplotter
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Rereading this again, it was by far so far so good. Emotions reflected well and I was emotional a bit and pitied the MC. A very dramatic plot and mixed with System and plot progression. Good read perfect to pass time 😊

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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

Wow an amazing work by the author himself! Delve into the story of revenge and friendship. A roller coaster ride of emotion and has a lot of potential. More readers and this will be discovered from the masses. I deeply recommend this one! [img=recommend]

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Sage_X
Sage_XLv13

As one of the first readers, I would like to say this book is a breath of creativity. the character designs and the motive of MC is clear and the side characters are solidly written. I'll definitely recommend it [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]

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Takaie
TakaieLv2

A lot of potential so far, only problem I had was that the start was a little rushed, but that’s minor

1yr
Assassin_Lover
Assassin_LoverLv14

This is a really good book with a lot of unique elements that are well-used. I didn't notice any grammatical errors, and the characters, from what I've read, felt real. Overall, Great Book!

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