New story, this time the MC is gonna be a peasant who will start a revolution (French Revolution-like). Is gonna be a long story, well if I dont lost interest in this idea that is. Inspiration is key when writing, for now I am excited with this idea sooooo

realistic story. I hate what happen to his mother, but I recognize that there has to be something that will motivate him to start the revolution, otherwise he'd be content with living a normal commonfolk life. keep going mate, the story is unique and have great potentials. just hope you don't bring canons and primitive rifles, cuz that will be a huge skip in evolution, there are many medieval weapons that are needed to be developped, and those are enough for him to dominate wars with. just the lack of siege warmachines in Planetos show how much primitive they are, I think the revolution should include Essos too.

Deleted my first review because I spoiled the cringey end of the first arc. Cringey as in its the most used cliche emotional catalyst use for fanfics. A good story stained by lazy writing to create emotional impact for change and story development. it's been used so much most of us have become numb to it and find ourselves asking why can't these authors find another way. but then you realize its a fanfic author and being that creative isn't in their skillset or they just aren't that committed to being creative. Not suggesting this author is lacking ability because his writing other than the situations that emotionally scar him are great. but im over reading such cliche dribble. im pretty sure most can still guess what im talking about but out of respect for a decent writer I've removed the exact details. even tho honestly at this point, people should be warned of such details beforehand. Not like its some amazing plot point worth remembering. sad to see a story with potential lose it. Still, this is my opinion and you should still give the story a chance.

An extremely good story with great potential. Hope to see more 👍.

This one got potential for advancing more i gope it wont get dropped 👍👌

All ready really interested seems grounded and it’s fun reading a small folk fix in which the individual doesn’t instantly become a lord seeing him grow up would be fun. Please keep up the good work but also make sure to keep the other GOT fic’s chapters coming!

It is an interesting story and has a protagonist with memories of a world similar to ours. Drama, tragedy and anguish make up the story so it will not be to the liking of some people, also the protagonist has not yet shown any knowledge of his original world.

Qualidade muito acima da média vale a pena ler só por isso mas tem muitos outros pontos bons também, finalmente uma fanfic onde o mc é um plebeu e melhor ainda, um revolucionário, eu sempre quis ler uma fanfic de GOT nesse estilo então o autor meio que está realizando um dos meus desejos.

this one of the top got fan fiction i ever read .I really hope the author doesn't drop it like the rest of his work.