It started very well. But the author puts several things in the story and simply doesn't develop it, he doesn't even develop the city system properly... besides there are several holes, many numbers are just thrown around and don't follow a linear progression. the mc simply gets strong and has a population of 100k+ when he is at a super low level...
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