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It started very well. But the author puts several things in the story and simply doesn't develop it, he doesn't even develop the city system properly... besides there are several holes, many numbers are just thrown around and don't follow a linear progression. the mc simply gets strong and has a population of 100k+ when he is at a super low level...
I really like this author's novels, the only problem is that the main character development is not so well done! In both works, after being reincarnated, the MC changes his personality completely, becoming almost another person... but I will continue to reading both
I literally cried in that chapter. it really hit me. I apologize for my horrible English, I'm from Brazil and I'm still learning. I just want to make it clear here in this chapter how much I love this novel, it made me create a very strong connection with the characters. Chapters like this make me too happy. it's probably over, I really hope the author continues to write. His writing is very powerful and captivating. thank you so much for this amazing novel!