Muito bom, eestou no capitulo 14, a escrita e boa, o OC (Personagen Original) tem um e muito bom e tem um jeito leve de ser mas tamben serio quando precisa gostei bastante, o ritmo esta exelente, quanto a gramatica nao posso comentar mas deve ser boa uso tradutor quee concerta pequenos erros na hora de traduzir e nao vi nem um entao ne, a ideia e legal nao e nova em si mas bem atraente, bem basicamente esta a meu gosto entao 5 eestrelas.
STEVIOL_GLY
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LIKEVery good, I'm on chapter 14, the writing is good, the OC (Original Character) has a very good character and he has a light way of being but also serious when he needs to, I really liked it, the rhythm is excellent, as for the grammar, I can't comment but it must be a good use of a translator that fixes small errors when translating and I didn't see one so, the idea is cool, it's not new in itself but very attractive, well mainly it's to my liking so 5 stars, I used a translator but I think which stays like this.
STEVIOL_GLY:can someone translate this into English? I tried google translate but it did not work