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Kexo_Be_Up
Kexo_Be_UpLv21yr
2023-03-06 05:14

The writing style is beautiful from the first chapter I read, but the characters give off a bit of blank sides seeming a little 1 dimensional at times, other than that its extremely solid. Better than mine anyway.

Dark Romance Chronicles: Secrets We Keep

MrFay
4.8
46 Chs

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MrFay
MrFayAuthor

Thank you for your valuable input. While the novel initially features characters that may appear one-dimensional, I have made efforts to develop them into more complex individuals as the story progresses. You can expect to gain a better understanding of these characters in the upcoming chapters. Thanks for reading!

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Kexo_Be_Up
Kexo_Be_UpLv2

I should catch up then

MrFay:Thank you for your valuable input. While the novel initially features characters that may appear one-dimensional, I have made efforts to develop them into more complex individuals as the story progresses. You can expect to gain a better understanding of these characters in the upcoming chapters. Thanks for reading!
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Sereinchoo
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Great story, captivating. The characters were lovely. Hope to see more of their interactions. Alesha seems like a good girl and passionate about fashion. I would surely give it a read. Oh I did ! 😊 (The descriptions was on point too - not too lengthy just good to give readers a sense of the surroundings) Keep up the good work author!

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Maryam_batool
Maryam_batoolLv1

I was recommended this web novel by a persistent friend who wanted my to perusal this novel. As a reader; I am awestruck by the author's vast and expressive vocabulary and not only that but his descriptive writing has thrilled me. I immensely enjoy reading the vividly written atmosphere and surroundings. The characters are distinct and attracts attention and suspense. After reading only 6 chapter I was greatly allured towards this novel and kept wondering about the incisive nature of the author. His writings has fervently peaked my interest and I am keenly waiting for the arrival of his new chapter with sheer zeal and enthusiasm.

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NocturnOwl
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I'm not a massive fan of fashion to start off with so you can imagine my surprise when I ended up being captivated by this. The character interactions and settings are such a treat to reach through. Writing quality is incredibly good, very consistent punctuation throughout all of the chapters making my read through very easy and enjoyable. The descriptions and details the author gives adds so much flavour overall to the characters and settings. Often going the extra mile to describe the expressions or mentality of they're characters or explaining further the area they are in. Story development flows naturally. allowing for the chapters to have a really good level of coherency throughout new releases. The events set up for the characters are really well established allowing for a much broader image on some of the characters and the jobs and responsibilities in their lifes. Character designs are high quality making them feel very realistic and believable, like you could meet them in person. Alongside this their expressions, mentality, dreams and goals are really well depicted giving the reader a much greater understanding of what thier working towards and how it effects them. Updating stability is great at the time of writing this, a new chapter was released 9 hours ago. The world background is given alot of attention to detail, fully describing how cutthroat New York can be in terms of job market or housing. Especially when those jobs are explored more and shown just how brutal it can be. Overall I really enjoyed the story so far. The characters are a lot of fun reading through. The author does a really great job at placing those characters in very interesting scenarios. Really feeling the characters joy and happiness. But as well as their unease and how a situation creeps them out. Really helps put the reader in the characters shoes. The latest chapters woo boy I don't think someone has managed to make me feel a characters uncomfort as much as this author.

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MrFay
MrFayAuthor

Please give an honest review, all of you! It will be much appreciated. I would love to hear your opinion about the story and its characters!

1yr
SaraSaavedra
SaraSaavedraLv1

Stories full of intrigue and suspense are my thing, so just by reading the synopsis of this story I was already hooked on it. I admire your way of narrating what happens to Alisha. Keep writing please

1yr
Sereinchoo
SereinchooLv2

Leaving a 2nd review (read till chapter 8), again the author, you have done a great job. It was interesting, with more in store in the later chapters, there was also unexpected turns and takes, let's see where it will take us from there.

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AbyssalVox
AbyssalVoxLv3

The author has a strong sense of corporate environment and you can tell that they know what they're writing about in all aspects of the book. One thing I will say is that there are a lot of characters introduced at the start and it's hard to keep up with all of them when they all interact with each other often. There are hints of mystery among the romance and with the way the author writes, it's sure to be an interesting read!

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yourfriendsteve
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Trinit33
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I've never really liked dark romance or horror, but this one captivated me and it just keeps drawing me in. I just can't stop reading. Adding this to my library.

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