a very bad start, the main character is more of a high school boy than an adult with a formed mindset, well, or a confused beginning with mental problems that runs away from them, and does not solve. If the author wanted to add realism to his works, then he had to read at least a couple of articles about the relationships, connections and psychology of ordinary people who got into a closed space with an impossible or almost impossible way to get out. And here we have a completely undeveloped motivation of the hero, regardless of what he will do next, I will not believe that such a person who was shown in the beginning will be able to survive in the world of SAO.
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thank you for the heads up, I was contemplating whether to read this or not.
It does not read that way to me, I'd suggest reading at least 5-10 chapters before deciding.
Jai_pareek:thank you for the heads up, I was contemplating whether to read this or not.
I honestly think you need to reread the fanfic if you think this way
thank you, but I think that after reading 15 chapters, I can clearly see how the author will act and I will not be interested in this story.
Jackoftrades:I honestly think you need to reread the fanfic if you think this way
Mans never heard of character development
Trueeeeeee
MrSimo:Mans never heard of character developmentimage
a lot of complaints for a lvl1[img=thinking]
You're an idiot
Morpchiuchus:a lot of complaints for a lvl1[img=thinking]
Bro is a certified hater. 90% of your reviews are 1 or 1.5 stars, and the only good ones are Chinese stories.
