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Eaaaaaa

W0W, I was joking sorry! I worte that because I was bored I really didn't mean it.

The only relevant this has is this being a young master type novel, where a young "misstress" Is insanely breautiful and "catches" the eyes of the main characters. Again, really.

"Now i wonder" Are you kidding, this persona isnt fooling anything, its entirely made up by the author and inconsistent. Anyway.

The anvil is not inside, the text has even stated atleast THAT. Taking off his cloak now ... he is STILL in the public's view.

Faulty.

Yeah, Adam had not mentioned in the slightest the other world. Yet she somehow knows. Thats really passed over the authors head. Or ma uhhhh be

Aw, darn. Sounds rough but we all learn stuff all the time. I'm sure it is dissapointing to realize a story isn't one you want to continue after two dhundred some chapters. Hope you weren't Too, Bummed out

Imagine some one decides to write a fan-iction of this story, That could be very cool, interesting too. I'm just a reader but I appreceate these kind of reviews .