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Lord_Cane
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2023-03-24 12:19

I thought that after 120 chapters, I should give myself a review. But really, this is more of a heads-up: - This book will have dark themes that may be triggering to some. It's not the darkest book ever, but read with discretion. - Is Harker an antihero? I considered this question for a long time and came into the conclusion that base on the definition, he is. He's not your typical edgy, morally gray antihero, but still an unconventional one. His motives are 'righteous' in hindsight but he doesn't hesitate to be brutal when needed. - Harker's character is flawed, and so is his powers. I took down the 'overpowered' tag because I decided I don't want people to think he is an OP Mary Sue MC who is a genius that never makes bad decisions in his life. If you don't like a flawed MC, go read another book. - As mentioned in the synopsis, the harem side would develop rather slow. There are 5 FLs in total, and the gaps on their introductions are far apart because I want them to be fully fleshed out with arcs that focus on them. As of 120 chapters, 2 out of 5 love interests had been introduced and Harker's relationship with the latest FL is still developing. - The mature parts are also sparse because of this. If you're just reading for that, then you got the wrong book. I want each of these mature parts to mean something and I also don't want my book to revolve around them, but on the journey of the MC instead. - The reincarnation and cultivation part may not be obvious at the beginning, but it is there. And there are many mysteries surrounding it. Feel free to make theories, I like reading them. -Don't expect this book to be just about a cool shapeshifting demon lord and just fighting monsters. IT DOES HAPPEN, but I made effort in putting depth to characters, the world, and the themes that this story has. Overall, I won't say it will be your favorite book or the best one you've ever read, because we all have different preferences. I just think that I did pretty well on giving justice to the premise I had in mind. Not perfect, but still good enough.

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Javon_Nixon
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If you ever decide to do another review of your book or future projects, you might want to sound more positive in them.

Deaboro
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lol you read yet how was it

Javon_Nixon:If you ever decide to do another review of your book or future projects, you might want to sound more positive in them.
SwirlOfTheRoot
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Sounds promising

Vitor_Lindo
Vitor_LindoLv12

Autor tem como compartilhar teu código fonte para mim escrever fanfic tbm 😃

Iwantcharacterdev
IwantcharacterdevLv14

Did u drop this or what’s up??

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