I been sleeping on this novel for awhile now I am glad I gave it a chance, and to my surprise this is a fantastic novel and the author writing is pretty good, easy to read and just quick spoiler the mc is not a sword nor spear user 😌!!! Dis novel deserve more recognition so plz Give this novel a try u won’t regret it

While the grammar and presentation have massive issues, this story shows potential. While the premise is nothing too original, with how much effort the author is putting on making new chapters, I wouldn't be surprised if this novel became famous. Continue with your hard work author! And if you can, please try to find a proofreader.

An easy to follow novel with a good mix of interesting characters. The detail in the action scenes really help to bring it to life while the story progression flows quite naturally, I suggest reviewing chapters before release but besides that good job

Man! I gotta say this takes me back to when I played my first MMORPG. It brings back memories. The writing could be a lot better, maybe the author could edit some of the earlier chapters because from my observation it does get better. The characters are fun and lively, but my fav chapter so far is Chapter 4. Keep it up man!

Although the grammar in the earlier chapters could use some reviewing, overall an easy to follow novel with interesting interactions between characters. the length of chapters and events within the story also fit well.

Hey there~ Read the first 5 chapters so far and the main thing that stood out was that the novel is easy on the eyes, good dialogue and pacing = effortless read. I also want to add that putting an ingame system into words can be tough at times, but you have made it neat and easy to understand. Good Job m8

First thing first, Love the originality of the characters, it's really fun to read the interaction between them. Second thing, the writing style of the author is so descriptive that it almost gives me a vivid image of what's happening. Third thing, the world is pretty good, and it might look like every other plot but I believe the author's imagination and looking at the very development of the story that it's going to be an interesting read. At last. Keep up the good work author.

Really captivating plot. I really love your writing style. Reviewing after reading 20 chapters so far and will keep reading. Keep up the good work.

The idea the story is based on is very interesting, and since I've read other novels with similar storylines, I can understand this better. The conversations are not awkward, unlike what I see in many other novels, while the length of each event is near perfect. One advice I would offer is to utilize more descriptive writing and review the grammar. Other than that, it's honestly a great read.