The story is good but it would be better if the MC was more powerful and bold to take certain actions
Agent_047
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LIKEif we as normal everyday people can think about it why can't he. Why does he need something to happen first.Don't take need make him a gary stue but also don't need to make him oblivious to reality. Just own up to the forced dramatization.
Agent_047:He is growing into that. It would be unrealistic if he just become like that without something that forces him to change that way.