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2023-03-19 03:03

You are doing great with the story.... nothing much to say . Just that it feels like mc s not so powerful and I think you should start giving him powers . ...... PLEASE DON'T DROP (as many people with good interesting plot leave the story hanging.)

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Demonwolf07
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yeah mc is weak.

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