Review Detail of Luomaze in No More Pain For This Villain.

Honestly I have no idea if this novel was planned out or just making up as we go. We got someone who lived an entire life and failed tremendously. Now in a new life they continue to fail tremendously. Honestly the main character makes no logical choices and it's like why even have included the second life when it doesn't mean anything. The pacing is horrible. I don't understand why it's so weird and it continues to get worse. The promise of the "volumes" getting better when this has been a mess since the start. The overall plot is just weird and contains so much filler I just can't explain it. The system itself is one of the worst story systems I have read. Just copy everyone else because what your system is doing is just worse. You really have something going on with the world and the story could be really good. I recommend you either finish this garbage and rewrite or just scrap it now and start making changes. This story could be so good but the more I read the more frustrating it is. For those thinking about reading or others in the middle of reading. Be prepared for a frustrating and an honest waste of time. Read at your own risk.