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Zorr0
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2023-08-21 07:38

in raws it's well written, 1000 plus chapters ..i read the free 92 chapters, no more.. not my cup of tea..

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Young_fruit_Smiley
Young_fruit_SmileyLv14

The reason why you didn't like it....

Zorr0
Zorr0Lv4

well this author is dragging one thing on and on. It's annoying.. Frankly, i have had enough of these type of stories where metaphorically speaking; you dig a mountain for treasure and end up getting a mouse.

Niazh
NiazhLv3

Thanks for poison tasting

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just come back from binging the mtl, and i cried a lot, even though im reading a google translation... on the third day i might be crying a lot because my eyes hurt from reading, but that should count too. I'm able to get invested in the story and i cried and laughed while reading (more crying than laughing tho)the author used writing techniques that i recognized that is somewhat different than other novels. ex {spoiler} : the mc need to breakthrough to the next great realm (martial king) to participate in a tournament that concerns the country fate along with his and family life, so he cultivated hard and finally reached the point where he can breakthrough, but when he checked on a status panel jade that can display cultivation progress in that world, the progress reset to 0. so he need to reach 100 again. later to convince another person his "wife" stated that his cultivation is martial king and about to breakthrough to the next stage (middle stage martial king). its not directly stated, but i realized while reading that while his cultivation progress is reset to 0, it didnt disappear to nothing, and it will be a power up later that didnt come out of nowhere.thats one of the great thing about this novel, power ups that the mc didnt know about but we as the reader would know from hints in the story either direct or indirect. its frustrating and exciting reading the mc getting mad on how his time is running out and he still cant breakthorough. so just want to say that i like this novel and please update it quickly so i can binge it with good translation on 2025.thanks.

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