Review Detail of YuR006 in The Fantastic Five.

Came from the forum. It’s my first time doing a quick review., so forgive me if it sounded off. From an overall stand point, I could say you nailed the character. Lively, relatable, alive, those words can be used to describe them. However, I haven’t read everything yet, so I can’t comment on the dynamic. Although they’re basic, they work. Next is the writing, you keep it simple, and i think it’s great that you do that. This kind of story definitely benefit from that. Very easy to take in. Development? It’s there, but very few chapters( Ijust don’t invest on paid chapters anyway, for all stories too) make it hard to judge whether if doing it good or not. Just my opinion though. For Stability, I’m gonna give it a 2 for now since I wasn’t there when the update was constant. But if it’s back to 2 months ago, I think a 4-star would better fit your story. Last but not least, the background. Hmm, what to say. It’s great. Thanks to it not being a fantasy world, many details can be ommitted easily without consequence. And that means info dump hardly exist, that’s what I feel about this. Wish you luck in the future, fellow author!