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2023-06-22 21:52

I decided to read this from all the positive reviews but im incredibly disappointed. This novel is your ,average full of cliches, copy of all the novels that came before. Extremely unoriginal.

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Well I am the author, so I will obviously be praising my own novel. Anyway, before you read my novel, I would like to explain some of the characters and background of the novel. The main character is Tang Yin. I prefer evil/villian main characters. Therefore, Tang Yin had been portrayed as a devil who only cares about himself and Xiao Fei. (If you decide to read the novel, you will find out who she is.) He will do anything that suits him, including killing innocent people for his own gain. He is similar to Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity. The background is a traditional ancient Chinese setting, so basically a wuxia or xianxia cultivation novel. However, most mc in wuxia novels are righteous and have a harem. I don't want any of that, i want the main character to focus solely on himself and Xiao Fei. In my opinion, the writing quality is very good. This is my first novel, so there may be a few minor grammar or spelling mistakes. Please forgive me on this aspect. The way I write has been shaped by the various novels I have read. These novels are: Reverend Insanity, Monster Paradise, Let Me Game In Peace, Warlock Of The Magus World, Birth Of Demonic Sword, Pursuit Of The Truth, Renegade Immortal, A Record Of A Mortals Journey To Immortality, Martial Peak, Bloodline System. There are a few more, but i cant remember. Also I will be releasing at least 2 chapters a day, sometimes a chapter or two extra if I have a lot of time and get immersed in writing. The story development is alright in my opinion. There is only one plot with an occasional plot twist here and there. There are no 2 plots mixed in together as I thought it might get confusing. If there is any type of plot you would like me direct some of my novel to, please let me know and if i find it feasible, ill implement it in the novel. If there are any mistakes or suggestions you would like to notify me off, I will be all ears. Thanks for reading this comment.

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