Well I am the author, so I will obviously be praising my own novel. Anyway, before you read my novel, I would like to explain some of the characters and background of the novel. The main character is Tang Yin. I prefer evil/villian main characters. Therefore, Tang Yin had been portrayed as a devil who only cares about himself and Xiao Fei. (If you decide to read the novel, you will find out who she is.) He will do anything that suits him, including killing innocent people for his own gain. He is similar to Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity. The background is a traditional ancient Chinese setting, so basically a wuxia or xianxia cultivation novel. However, most mc in wuxia novels are righteous and have a harem. I don't want any of that, i want the main character to focus solely on himself and Xiao Fei. In my opinion, the writing quality is very good. This is my first novel, so there may be a few minor grammar or spelling mistakes. Please forgive me on this aspect. The way I write has been shaped by the various novels I have read. These novels are: Reverend Insanity, Monster Paradise, Let Me Game In Peace, Warlock Of The Magus World, Birth Of Demonic Sword, Pursuit Of The Truth, Renegade Immortal, A Record Of A Mortals Journey To Immortality, Martial Peak, Bloodline System. There are a few more, but i cant remember. Also I will be releasing at least 2 chapters a day, sometimes a chapter or two extra if I have a lot of time and get immersed in writing. The story development is alright in my opinion. There is only one plot with an occasional plot twist here and there. There are no 2 plots mixed in together as I thought it might get confusing. If there is any type of plot you would like me direct some of my novel to, please let me know and if i find it feasible, ill implement it in the novel. If there are any mistakes or suggestions you would like to notify me off, I will be all ears. Thanks for reading this comment.

I will start with this: How tf isn't this novel famous?!?? Why doesn't the author have a contract already. This is godly (Coming from a guy who read thousands of novels) This a literal hidden gem! -The writing is a pretty good, I have no complaints. -The characters feel real enough, as although this the world of cultivation, everyone has a brain that uses it. -The MC's character is excellent, especially for evil mmcs lovers. He's reasonable, smart, ruthless, his feelings doesn't cloud his judgment and knows when to show his strength and when to not. His super strong but not too op, it's pretty acceptable. -The update stability is pretty good. -I love the pace, it's fast but not too fast. -The world building is not the best, but pretty acceptable. *On the side note: the author often repeat the same idea few times in the same chapter, but I'm pretty sure it just an honest mistake as nothing is perfect. Overall an excellent novel definitely recommend it, I just hope the author update faster cuz I'm greedy for more!

Do to my love for cultivation novels I'd say this is a hidden gem. I like it alot so far. Continue to work hard author XD! 👍

The definition of mediocre and cliched, the story is boring and simple with nothing unique or special about it. The main character is supposedly smart but never shows it. The enemies are all brainless young masters. the world building is nonexistent.

A very good Novel, I love how the concept of cultivation was introduced, definitely going to keep reading, good work author!!

Awesome character-building! It is quite a while since I saw a novel with an internally conflicted MC. I'm going to save this since I sympathize with the MC!

This is the novel I was looking for omg author I hope u don't abandon the novel and I will help you with everything I have

It's a bit early to tell the direction of the story. I'll cover the things so far. Writing quality is decent and has improved from the 1st chp. It's easy enough to read. No off putting errors or anything. But it can definitely be better and made more engrossing. As for the story, I wouldn't say there are no clichés but things are resolved quickly and it doesn't drag down the story. Like I said before, it is still early but there's lots of potential to make an interesting story. This is something I hope the author focuses on. Developing important characters not just the MC. I also feel that mc jumped the gun too quickly in the killing the entire family, he doesn't have a strong reason to kill the innocents as well or even torture the family head. His father's situation wasn't right, but the mc's retaliation was too much too quickly. Not enough development for that sort of thing. Objectively the family considered his father easily replaceable, only a few were directly responsible for their suffering. Author could still fix that playing on MC being inexperienced and hot-headed back then because frankly since the mc isn't insane there isn't enough development to make him so cold and ruthless from the get go. World background is slowly being built, I hope it's done intricately and interestingly.

An amazing work of craft, the Mc is not a simp for women and is ruthless when he needs to be. He has his priorities straight, and the story is going strong.