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FTLnovaKid
FTLnovaKidLv132yr
2023-02-24 11:01

Granted I only read 5 chapters so my review should be read skeptically. They just did not hook me in. The only big positive I noticed was the grammer was great and I did not see any errors. Which is always a great thing. The negatives for me was the plot is very cliche and overused. In my opinion martial spirit cultivation is my least favorite of the “systems”. And I just did not like how the plot was progressing it seemed very predictable. The book was “cringey” at times. I just did not want to continue reading the book. But who knows, I do think many people could find enjoyment in this book. Maybe even love it, but this book is just not for me.

Journey to the Pinnacle

Toothless5697
4.5
390 Chs

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FTLnovaKid
FTLnovaKidLv13

I also just read that you (author) said your writing was shaped by many books you read. Which means you have already cut off your path as a writer. I hope you meant inspired because otherwise you are just going to be a conglomeration of authors. And not yourself, you are just writing what other people have already written. Which makes it very hard to break out and become successful as an author.

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Toothless5697
Toothless5697Author

i meant in the sense of grammar, not the plots or characters.

FTLnovaKid:I also just read that you (author) said your writing was shaped by many books you read. Which means you have already cut off your path as a writer. I hope you meant inspired because otherwise you are just going to be a conglomeration of authors. And not yourself, you are just writing what other people have already written. Which makes it very hard to break out and become successful as an author.
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Toothless5697
Toothless5697Author

Well I am the author, so I will obviously be praising my own novel. Anyway, before you read my novel, I would like to explain some of the characters and background of the novel. The main character is Tang Yin. I prefer evil/villian main characters. Therefore, Tang Yin had been portrayed as a devil who only cares about himself and Xiao Fei. (If you decide to read the novel, you will find out who she is.) He will do anything that suits him, including killing innocent people for his own gain. He is similar to Fang Yuan from Reverend Insanity. The background is a traditional ancient Chinese setting, so basically a wuxia or xianxia cultivation novel. However, most mc in wuxia novels are righteous and have a harem. I don't want any of that, i want the main character to focus solely on himself and Xiao Fei. In my opinion, the writing quality is very good. This is my first novel, so there may be a few minor grammar or spelling mistakes. Please forgive me on this aspect. The way I write has been shaped by the various novels I have read. These novels are: Reverend Insanity, Monster Paradise, Let Me Game In Peace, Warlock Of The Magus World, Birth Of Demonic Sword, Pursuit Of The Truth, Renegade Immortal, A Record Of A Mortals Journey To Immortality, Martial Peak, Bloodline System. There are a few more, but i cant remember. Also I will be releasing at least 2 chapters a day, sometimes a chapter or two extra if I have a lot of time and get immersed in writing. The story development is alright in my opinion. There is only one plot with an occasional plot twist here and there. There are no 2 plots mixed in together as I thought it might get confusing. If there is any type of plot you would like me direct some of my novel to, please let me know and if i find it feasible, ill implement it in the novel. If there are any mistakes or suggestions you would like to notify me off, I will be all ears. Thanks for reading this comment.

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AshburnDz
AshburnDzLv13

I will start with this: How tf isn't this novel famous?!?? Why doesn't the author have a contract already. This is godly (Coming from a guy who read thousands of novels) This a literal hidden gem! -The writing is a pretty good, I have no complaints. -The characters feel real enough, as although this the world of cultivation, everyone has a brain that uses it. -The MC's character is excellent, especially for evil mmcs lovers. He's reasonable, smart, ruthless, his feelings doesn't cloud his judgment and knows when to show his strength and when to not. His super strong but not too op, it's pretty acceptable. -The update stability is pretty good. -I love the pace, it's fast but not too fast. -The world building is not the best, but pretty acceptable. *On the side note: the author often repeat the same idea few times in the same chapter, but I'm pretty sure it just an honest mistake as nothing is perfect. Overall an excellent novel definitely recommend it, I just hope the author update faster cuz I'm greedy for more!

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Tokyo_Ghoul13
Tokyo_Ghoul13Lv3

Do to my love for cultivation novels I'd say this is a hidden gem. I like it alot so far. Continue to work hard author XD! 👍

2yr
Jonathanjoestar
JonathanjoestarLv3

The definition of mediocre and cliched, the story is boring and simple with nothing unique or special about it. The main character is supposedly smart but never shows it. The enemies are all brainless young masters. the world building is nonexistent.

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One_Singularity
One_SingularityLv14

An amazing novel with top quality content and consistent chapters, I think the novel has some unique and intriguing ideas. Overall I think the novel is Great and I hope the author continues with this Book.

2yr
Longevity_Star
Longevity_StarLv12

An amazing work of craft, the Mc is not a simp for women and is ruthless when he needs to be. He has his priorities straight, and the story is going strong.

2yr
EternalKings
EternalKingsLv2

A very good Novel, I love how the concept of cultivation was introduced, definitely going to keep reading, good work author!!

2yr
RyujiSakamata
RyujiSakamataLv11

Awesome character-building! It is quite a while since I saw a novel with an internally conflicted MC. I'm going to save this since I sympathize with the MC!

2yr
Heavenly_Supreme
Heavenly_SupremeLv4

This is the novel I was looking for omg author I hope u don't abandon the novel and I will help you with everything I have

2yr
Chaosorder889
Chaosorder889Lv13

Evil mc I hope the author keep like this I’ enjoying reading this novel if u r looking for evil mc that slaughter and do anything to level up this u go btw I hope the author doesn’t introduce poison to the novel or harem or romance m

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