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2023-01-26 22:51

It's not bad, but it's essentially just an imitation of every other HP fanfic out there. Also, the MC becomes stronger than 99% of wizards before he even turns 11 years old, how will the rest of the story be interesting like that?

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The_Square_Squad
The_Square_SquadAuthor

Yeah your right. I changed the part where he uses an overpowered ability in like the fifth chapter to make him seem closer to an eleven year old. So now yes he has very high talent and will become OP fast but I will make it gradual as he attends Hogwarts. Thanks for the rating

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