Hello Self reviewing author here 🥴 This is actually my second time writing a fanfiction on Ultimate Evolution, i really love Ultimate Evolution tbh it's perfect and i really wanted to write a wish ful filling fanfic about it so i did. I am still an amateur writer and don't know much about writing so i really welcome all advice and tips in comments. I am all open for suggestions regarding future plot, character development and other things. well that's all.

author deletes reviews, my negative review was deleted and I'm pretty sure so we're others.

Didn't read original. Being a Chinese hater, or something like this. But i quite enjoy this. But, well yeah. I quite dislike this nigthmare realm system - I mean, when you look on hardened- reduce you damage by 30(or was giving plus hp, don't care anyway). It's does look stupid and makes you wonder how this even supposed to work... But that's a minor point. Like mc gets better, somehow, and that's all that matter, right? Somewhat. The other thing, is trying to be nice to girls sometimes. I can't blame them for acting stupid - they have right to do so. And i can't blame mc for being too soft. He have enough breath room to be a gentleman and talk about eternal love with first beautiful girl that care about his well-being... And second one. Okay, it's cringe. More so, if he wasn't so overpowered, I would beach slap both of them for wasting his time. In his shoes. Like beach, there is a literal war machine that wants your head and my too, and you take you time to sniff around and be salty? Is this all you care for?👀👀👀🔪

The first chapters may seem good, but then the novel becomes garbage. mc has no brain, mc acts with emotions, mc has no logic. everyone's iq drops.

Very good story, I hope you don't abandon it. I would like that when the worlds of the original story are over, you vote for the next worlds that I can go to, but apart other than that everything else is fine

this is really good and addicting. keep it up............................................................................................................

it's fanfiction of a fanfictionish novel but it's a good read nevertheless I enjoyed it

The story is very entertaining. I'm looking forward to what else the author will show us. I do wish it updated more often, but that's mostly due to being addicted to reading the story

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Looks good, first few chapters are also good. If it changes in the future (for the worse), will change the review. But for now I recommend it.