Item: Surviving the Multiverse with a Warhammer 40k System
Rating: 4
Author: artemdeus

artemdeusLv51yr

2023-07-23 16:09

The writing quality needs some work but not too bad honestly, story development is pretty good and immersive, best fictional fanfic I've read so far.I highly suggest this for Warhammer fans and all readers out there.

Surviving the Multiverse with a Warhammer 40k System

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Pretty good novel qnd Unique i realy love this. Updates are little bit unstable but you can survive. Also author use complicated words that i need to check on google what they meaning is. But overall good. P.S. Read your selfs if wanna know the story

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King_JongLv4

5/5 for warhammer. Nn

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Linus279Lv4

The fanfiction has an interesting and promising idea, but the reading experience is hindered by the convoluted writing style. There are many unnecessary and lengthy sentences that can confuse readers and divert attention away from the actual content. The author should strive to express their thoughts more clearly and concisely in order to provide a pleasant reading experience. Nonetheless, the story is appealing and has the potential to become a real pleasure to read with some revision

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Interesting, very interesting! I like it!

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DeitzLv12

I'm sure in whatever the native language of the author this makes more sense. However, this is barely readable in English. Sentences are capitalized every other word. You will see sentences that say, " Wow How you Know You amazing!" and that's the least of the grammatical sins. I'm sure there is a plot buried under there somewhere, but it's too painful to find.

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no space marine ??? then bye for now maybe in future when I had more time to waste I come back to read warhammer that had no space marine

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GrandtheacupLv5

Honestly I have an hard time enjoying this story. The whole back and forth between 40k and starship trooper is kind of breaking my immersion for the story. Wished you made two stories rather than 1.

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JCTLv4

i was expecting starship troopers world and the rest are extra spice tech procurement you should change the title 🧐 the novel in a more appropriate cause this novel contains almost all Warhammer so far while the starship troopers as main world was treated as fast word type I'll change my review once i readt it whole I'm currently at the half its not it's not bad the title turn it bad

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