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Eddicted
EddictedLv51yr
2023-02-16 07:33

The story seems to have been written by a kid. The MC is made dumb to facilitate the story progression. he doesn't even realize the obvious things or question anything. The world is so bare that it is safe to say that there in none. The other characters doesn't have any depth to them and are just one dimensional.

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Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusAuthor

... Just checked... Your rating for Shadow Slave was also 2 stars... Imma take this as a compliment then :D

Eddicted
EddictedLv5

If you had taken it as a review you might improve your story by correcting those defects ..........................But then again....... Whatever helps you make it easier to sleep at night.

Shadow_Magus:... Just checked... Your rating for Shadow Slave was also 2 stars... Imma take this as a compliment then :D
Shadow_Magus
Shadow_MagusAuthor

Lol, is this your version of positive criticism... sure then. I'll take it like that, and improve my story to the best of my abilities... You know what... I was going to say some things... but I realise its better to just chill out and have fun. Not like I am making money off this platform... why get worked up against people. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ At the very least, you bothered to review this novel, and for that I thank you. Bye.

Eddicted:If you had taken it as a review you might improve your story by correcting those defects ..........................But then again....... Whatever helps you make it easier to sleep at night.
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