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I love that you tried writing a reverend insanity fanfic but there are so many things wrong with this novel like the plot is too rushed, the mc is too overpowered, grammer errors, etc. Only reason I am not giving this a lower rating is because this is your first book and if you really wanna be a professional writer you have to learn from your mistakes and only then can you write a great evil mc fic or novel.
Reverend Insanity: Experiment N.001
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Hello, could you send me some apps or pages for grammar? I don't speak English and I want to translate it but I don't want it to be bad or an MTL
Heartless_Qi_:please just write a character like fang yuan ie not running after women not stupid and try to reach at least 200 chapters. usually most authors forget about the crazed demon cave and just try to steal the sovereign immortal aperture and make fang yuan look crazy or something while taking every woman like collecting pokemon.
My fear of not wanting to be repetitive is holding me back from making larger paragraphs, I promise I am trying to correct that. as for overpowered, well he doesn't have 500 years of experience, so he needs an early buffer, trust his ability won't kill immortals, unless they have a strong history of being weak-willed. I presume my grammar will improve as long as I keep going, but I don't know for sure.
please just write a character like fang yuan ie not running after women not stupid and try to reach at least 200 chapters. usually most authors forget about the crazed demon cave and just try to steal the sovereign immortal aperture and make fang yuan look crazy or something while taking every woman like collecting pokemon.
KlLOLO:My fear of not wanting to be repetitive is holding me back from making larger paragraphs, I promise I am trying to correct that. as for overpowered, well he doesn't have 500 years of experience, so he needs an early buffer, trust his ability won't kill immortals, unless they have a strong history of being weak-willed. I presume my grammar will improve as long as I keep going, but I don't know for sure.
that sounds like a nightmare, a ri ff is always welcomed but u dont mess with fy cz his story doesn't need improvement there is a vast world oftiu can explore that through ff,i have seen 1 like this called verdant heart
Heartless_Qi_:please just write a character like fang yuan ie not running after women not stupid and try to reach at least 200 chapters. usually most authors forget about the crazed demon cave and just try to steal the sovereign immortal aperture and make fang yuan look crazy or something while taking every woman like collecting pokemon.