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I only read novel's, fanfic's that contain a rational protagonist.
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Mc is an individual dependent on the system for everything. His mindset is flawed he gives benefits to his friends just for the sake of being his friend. The only reason he is still alive right now is because of the plot armor otherwise in reality I would see a character like this perishing under 50 chapters. Garbage novel nothing you can't find here just a replica of other anti hero system novels.
do one chapter below 1600 words since above 1600 takes 2 fast passes when the chapters get paid and webnovel rewards authors based on consistency so post every day or 2 days albeit some authors lose motivation this way it's a flawed system but nothing I can do I also only donate power stones when I see new chapters because I am busy with my life and only login this app when there is a new notification of chapter
Despite author saying he is new to writing dark novels I find it difficult to believe because up to now I was immersed in this world so the author is probably improving at lightning speed which I am happy for you don't find dark novels with quality like this these days. If mc could be described in one word it would be rational and benefit oriented mc is fighting alone against the world put against him but it dosen't faze him because in his eyes everyone is exp to him. Don't read this if your a snowflake.
The Idea was promising but the undertone out of place comedy made the novel braindead. So many out of place things happening in the novel it's insane the mc acts like Deadpool breaking the fourth wall saying quirky jokes now and then to himself. What was especially retard,ed was mc thirsting over some weak baggage alien named Naba and telling him how to get stronger infinitely and once the other Saiyans learn this non of them have the brains to copy the mc and grow stronger then him because of the protagonist halo keeping everyone's IQ at minus 100 so there you have it the novel was promising at start but western authors can't write any fanfic without a hundred fuc,kup's compared to Chinese authors. Waste of time...
Every author I ask has that same delusional answer. I have read books of all genre for 5 years so take it as a passer bys advice your the author whether your story is ruined or not doesn't concern me except if it's good I will stick around and recommend you to my server. My only purpose was to tell you that putting romance in novels ruins them unless your writing a urban slice of life you will have plenty of relationships with side characters the fact you say that "romance" that will be as small as a grain will be included and cope it up at a realistic relationship is beyond my understanding. Best of luck to you I mean your work no harm.