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Kisshot
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Hi guys! This is my second project and one that is planned to be long-term. I will mention a few points that might help you decide if this story is for you or not: WARNING: There might be some spoilers for future events! .... ... .. 1) The MC will be calm and rational most of the time, his Martial Soul and some personal experiences may influence his personality over time, such as hating deplorable and shameless acts, however, he will always appreciate the bonds of friendship very much. In front of his women, he will be very attentive and affectionate. So for those who prefer very dominating or evil MC's, etc. This MC will not be to their liking. 2) The plot is quite generic regarding the Martial Soul and joining the Spirit Hall, do not expect anything different in that aspect, as it is not the purpose of this story. The plot will be the basis for the interactions between the MC and his love interests, which will be the main focus of the story. 3) The harem will be quite large (check the auxiliary chapter for the chosen members). However, I will try to give each girl her own moment in the story. Inevitably some girls will be more relevant than others. 4) Each girl will have her own personality, some will be quite submissive and supportive; others quite arrogant, and possessive; and the relationship between them will vary. It is likely that some girls will behave selfishly or there will be disagreements between them or with the MC, this will be part of the story and I will try to base it on their canonical personalities. 5) This story will be the adaptation of an MTL ( auxiliary chapter for the name). This decision was made to have a base to work on and to be able to keep a constant update rate, however, many things will be modified, and whole plots can be added or deleted, so don't confuse it with a literal translation. Other than that, take the story as an AU, so there will be some changes that the author of the original material will do or that I will do. 6) As I mention in the auxiliary chapter, this story will be my side project, and I will write it when I have free time, however, it is almost guaranteed that I will keep it going until the end (unless it is not to people's liking). Each month the update schedule will vary. 7) The story will be pretty slow-paced. 8) Lemon scenes will be included in the story, however, they are not the main purpose of the novel, but only a natural part of the plot. So they will be divided into three types: Explicit scenes, small descriptions, and mentions. The last two will be the most abundant and when there are explicit scenes, I will warn in advance. Although there is a lot to talk about, I don't want to go into too much detail, so if you have any doubts, write them in the comments. That's all, I hope you enjoy the reading!

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Douluo Dalu: Royal Dragon Astonishing the World

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Fifth_Goose
Fifth_GooseLv5Fifth_Goose

is this translation?

Kisshot
KisshotAuthorKisshot

It was already answered in point 5, or you can find more information in the auxiliary chapters.

Fifth_Goose:is this translation?
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

I just read 3 chapters and all he did was praise Yu Xiaogang, will he be his lackey along with Tang San? I really can't stand them, even the author of Soul Land acknowledged that his characters are trash, I don't want to read a fanfic where these characters are constantly fawned over

Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

perfect

Kisshot:It was already answered in point 5, or you can find more information in the auxiliary chapters.
General_Mahoraga
General_MahoragaLv3General_Mahoraga

did the author really say that?

Gabichu_Yeah:I just read 3 chapters and all he did was praise Yu Xiaogang, will he be his lackey along with Tang San? I really can't stand them, even the author of Soul Land acknowledged that his characters are trash, I don't want to read a fanfic where these characters are constantly fawned over
Gabichu_Yeah
Gabichu_YeahLv3Gabichu_Yeah

The author said that he will change his mind about Yu Xiaogang later, I don't know why the message is censored or something like that 👍👍

General_Mahoraga:did the author really say that?
Evade
EvadeLv4Evade

actually someone already translating it with better translation but unfortunately he stopped.

Kisshot
KisshotAuthorKisshot

1. This is not a literal translation, but an adaptation, from chapter 11 onwards it deviates in some points. 2. I found no translation of this story, if you mean the one with 155 chapters, that was only machine translation.

Evade:actually someone already translating it with better translation but unfortunately he stopped.
Kisshot
KisshotAuthorKisshot

That's what I said, some word I'm using is being censored for some reason.

Gabichu_Yeah:The author said that he will change his mind about Yu Xiaogang later, I don't know why the message is censored or something like that 👍👍
ISuckAtNaming
ISuckAtNamingLv13ISuckAtNaming

you sold me at no 4, author san.

NoYuriHarem
NoYuriHaremLv1NoYuriHarem

Any yuri?

Kisshot
KisshotAuthorKisshot

There will be none of that

NoYuriHarem:Any yuri?
noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

Op mc?

Psan
PsanLv5Psan

So... This is a Fanfiction of a Fanfiction LOL?

Beyond_
Beyond_Lv3Beyond_

finally fanfiction 2

Psan:So... This is a Fanfiction of a Fanfiction LOL?
dark_knight_7048
dark_knight_7048Lv4dark_knight_7048

bro is it dropped?