Review Detail of Spelloyal in Marvel: The Social Link System

This is a great story! The way the social link works to empower the MC is perfect!!! The only problem I could point out would be how inhumane the MC seems to not be bothered to see a massacre and hundreds of corpses. I understand that he doesn't feel guilty about killing and doesn't even bother with death, since the MC's circumstances seem to affect him a little, making him accept death as natural and not bother him, the problem is that he doesn't not even feel queasy watching people get their heads blown off. Another point that could be improved would be the somewhat rushed way in which the Arcana of death was developed, I would have preferred it to have taken longer given the person with whom he developed this social link being someone experienced who should not bond with people so easily. I know I talk a lot about these two negatives, but honestly they are minor issues that stand out because everything else is good, not perfect but good. In general this is really a very good fanfic and I feel that even in just 18 chapters I could see that instead of getting worse like many fanfics do, this one actually gradually got better. While the beginning was not so good, the story until chapter 18 showed good progress and unfolded very well.