it is okay to read, a lot of plot inconsistencies, feels like a fragmented story, common sense is not common here, the mc is arrogant and ignorant, the system is almost useless and somehow it is more stupid than mc, system should have been a guide and provide basic guideline for foundation and for mc, character growth should have been in the starting chapters not at the later chapters (chapters 20), and author you seem to lack knowledge of what 05 scp foundation are, what is mc unique character trait? from what I'm seeing he is lacking most basic knowledge, discipline, leadership, wisdom.last but not least, pov changes which have marks like ** or --- even, scenes change are too abrupt.
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