Review Detail of Powwll in Harry Potter system in Douluo Dalu
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i read until half part of first chapter, i'm giving 4 stars just to dont screw with your work, my personal opnion its 1 start ( cant give 0 star) Doulou Dalu cultivators has 9 rings ( 18 for dual spirit ) the mc get ""1 "" speell for ring so ( 9 spells from harry portter ) i love ff with harry potter , but spells from there are ( for me ) utility spells on majority , not a powerfull spells . so from start its a good idea but bad executions, if he get a school for ring like " 1 Ring - Random Get 1 School , EX: charm , transfiguration etc" But 1 Spell its too little for a kind of spell that is considered utility well, Good luck on your fanfiction.
Harry Potter system in Douluo Dalu
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Well, kinda my thought as well, but since I haven't read it yet, idk if the author was smart enough to not make such a stupid mistake. Transfiguration could be one single spell for all transfigurations, or at least a category. Wingardium Leviosa could be more or less telekinesis, protego all kinds of shields, a cutting curse etc.
i agree, if you read and the author got smart to make something interesting, not overpower the normal spells to make a expeliarmos a atomic bomb, tell me and i will remove that comentary to help author and ask forgiviness for my fast criticism.[img=recommend]
animadrop:Well, kinda my thought as well, but since I haven't read it yet, idk if the author was smart enough to not make such a stupid mistake. Transfiguration could be one single spell for all transfigurations, or at least a category. Wingardium Leviosa could be more or less telekinesis, protego all kinds of shields, a cutting curse etc.
Unfortunately, not really. I skimmed through it all and it is basically usefull spells, but made into their godlike versions. No variation, no development through training, no diversity. The spells could just as well have been divine skills with different names he got bestowed and his martial soul could have been anything and it wouldn't have changed anything in the story...
Powwll:i agree, if you read and the author got smart to make something interesting, not overpower the normal spells to make a expeliarmos a atomic bomb, tell me and i will remove that comentary to help author and ask forgiviness for my fast criticism.[img=recommend]