Author, I don't know how you'll be taking this, but i'ma say it the way I see it. This fanfic is way too centered around the MC, Jack. Everything goes his way, and nothing ever goes awry. It's weird. Very weird. Like God just created a world for him as his play ground or something. it lacks emotions, thrill, schemes and stuff like that that usually accompanies Marvel Universe. Also, characters like Tony, Peter, Natasha, In fact all the characters are just too trusting. Like they can't ever find a fault in Jack. That's weird on so many levels. Even the Year is weird. Keep up your good work though, this ain't for me
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LIKEI agree. It reminds me a bit of two kids bickering about whose self made hero character is better as well, where everytime one makes up random bs that supposedly explains it all and why their character is better, then the other comes up with his own random bs reason. Because honestly most of the start of the story once he's finally done and transmigrated, is a small paragraph explaining the prior one with a bs reason about why it supposedly makes sense. After that, it's exactly as you say, everything goes the way he wants it to, no hardships whatsoever, no clash in personality with people he meets. It reminds me of an episode of big bang theory where Sheldon is off in his own imaginary world as he explains to Penny what he expected to happen.