Item: The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter
Rating: 3.6
Author: Carol_Deal

Carol_DealLv11yr

2023-06-20 06:08

I love the idea of a deaf main character. Iris and her predicament are intriguing. The story does need some editing and a proofreader, which I'd be happy to help with if you're interested.

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

i_want_to_sleep

4.6

1042 Chs

Liked by 6 people

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13BlackdogLv15

Definitely editing. It's such a brilliant storyline but the grammatical issues are very distracting.

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Such a great story, really had me going.Can someone help me obtain an award by liking this comment? Pretty please...

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king_zLv11

MUST READ! Heartbreaking story about the female and male lead!

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Johnna_oo7Lv14

I have never been captivated by a story like this one!!! It is so good and the author is brilliant!! I must warn you potential readers that there are many dark and twisted scenes, however seeing the resiliency of the characters his what really makes it captivating. I love the constant suspense of the story and the development of the characters. It pains me to give this story less than a 5 star review, since it has me so hooked, but here are the two reasons why it gets a 4.6 star review instead of a full 5 stars: 1. There are many grammatical errors and past pretenses that need to be corrected. Sometimes I’d go as far to say there’s broken English. I would love nothing more than to be able to edit this story free of charge to make it a better reading experience for all. 2. It is a super slow burn romance story. I don’t normally like slow burns, and the slow pace is definitely agitating; however the story is so intriguing, I can look past that an appreciate the effort the author has put in to world building and character development. It’s a very intricate story with so many schemes, I have to believe the author is an absolute genius to be able to plot all this out! The author religiously drops 2 chapters each day, which is amazing. However once you get sucked in and all caught up it will be irritating, as they are typically short to keep reader costs down and often leave you on a cliffhanger. I’m always dying for more and very impatient for more, even though the author is so consistent. I think once a month or every six weeks or so, the author does a bonus drop of 6-10 chapters and I swear it’s like Christmas. If you can handle the dark themes and slow burn, I HIGHLY recommend this story.

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BookloverUSALv14

Well this is a very, very dark story and I mean description of children and babies death dark ( I do not think the author reads comments, because they would have known that they needed to tone the darkness down. We read books for entertainment not to have nightmares for real). It is very poorly written ( I sure it would suck in the original language as well, it is not just translation) and although we finally see some characters development the story is absolutely dragging. Too many side stories with no proper development, or closure. FL is alright but why on earth would I root for an happy ever after with her rapist??? I am still reading to see if Iris get a deserved ending…DO NOT READ AND WASTE YOUR COINS, that is my warning. ⚠️

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grey_waveLv4

The story is too perfect till now. No unnecessarily dragging, and every chapter is full of thriller. After each chapter I keep wondering what will happen next. Though I didn't like ML's some particular behavior with FL at the beginning, but something like that was bound to happen because of his past. Overall a mind-blowing story👍

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Maida_ArcherLv13

while book is good, giving it 1 star as APP otself is a scam that constantly double charges for chapters read.. I will be reporting this to Apple!!! SCAM

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Nevermind_8798Lv4

This story was amazing. 😍 I was captivated from the beginning of this novel and can't stop reading it, hope you can create more wonderful books, we will support you in our best way. Many thanks to the author of this wonderful story 💜.

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pls give me a like to open the next chapter plz.

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