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NotNootNoot
NotNootNootLv31yr
2023-04-08 14:44

overall pretty good, other than the slow story progression, world building and unnecessary interactions.

Levelling by the Sidelines

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Raj_Shah_7152
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Summary - The concept is interesting, worth giving a try. Overall it's a solid 4 stars. There are grammatical mistakes but they are within an acceptable range, the pacing is slow but it has only been 12 chapters. Overall too early to judge anything except the concept, which feels like a solid 5 star.

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.The Author is back with another work again! First of all, I would like to commend the interesting character introductions. It's impressive and easy to understand. The quality of the chapters does not disappoint but rather it will make you want to read more. Even though it has only 10 chapters, I can definitely say that this novel has potential. So what are you waiting for? Go and give it a try!

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This is a great book. I've read until chapter 7 and I love every part of it. The only issue that I've had is the whole 'info dump'. It's been sort of frustrating to read through all of this information in a span of only a few chapters and it's also demotivating. My advice for the author is to try to spread out all of the information so it's easier for readers to absorb the information. But, this is also a difficult skill to use as, in my opinion, it requires experience. Other than that, I've enjoyed the book.

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The story has a promising plot and a very relatable main character. 🙌 The description of the background and the characters is first-class. 👌 The flow of the novel is amazing and the length of the chapters and paragraphs are enjoyable to read. The emotions and actions, you feel them and can experience them as you read. 🤌🏻 The story itself is plot-driven, with a really interesting and unique setting. 🥷🏻 I can not wait to see what else the author and Jace come up with! I hope the author will continue writing the story!

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Ethel_Imaginations
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I'll give another review after 50 chaps, but for now... I'm hooked man. The lazy protagonist and the twists of events really left me hanging... man! I can't wait for more chaps. Looking forward to it!!! 😃😃😃

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