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2024-01-17 10:25

I like this novel and it’s good so far I like the character development and how he gets strong i don’t know if this novel is going to have romance or not but I don’t like how he saw the world as a novel but he came to realize that people have souls and they are living their own lives that a big development improvement will not only that I like how the world the author is creating and how will explain he puts in the story but I do got some issues with the author how can he make one of the best girl in a novel and not have her as a love interest it’s the demon Lord in the second hidded dungeon where he meets her to be honest I lost it when he had to leave her I was emotional 🥲 any way the novel is good and romance i don’t know I am to a point when he meets a girl that he talks to and tells her his past tell her that he in a novel but it’s not that I can’t get over the fact about the lord herself will it is when I see a character that is good with mc I can’t get over it and I will drop it is he has a love interest with another character even if she going to be the best girl I can’t see it other then the lord herself any ways I don’t know if this has harem which is good because I don’t like it and there a lot of people that are the same as me this novel i will recommend to read don’t take my words but it’s good 😊

Clearing The World That's Inside A Novel

kxixrxixtxo
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thanks for the review and reading it! Guess you are a member of Enyo cult too. 😂💔

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kxixrxixtxo:thanks for the review and reading it! Guess you are a member of Enyo cult too. 😂💔
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Okay, I will be honest maybe around 3.5. That would be how I had rate my novel. Book 1 is complete, so I think it's time I write a review. I will be honest I suck at updating. So now rather than focusing on how many chapters to update I will try to deliver words instead. Around 11-12k words every week. You might find it generic, cliched, I can't gurantee it will fit your tastes but I think I did a good job at writing a story for my first time, more so when I just started it on a whim. I am sure it's enjoyable read, just decent not a masterpiece but not a trash either. If you call it trash I might cry TwT Give it a try if you can and don't ask me why I rated my book five but gave it different rating while the? review. Thanks for the read! As long as it's not a spoiler you want I will answer your question!

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Bruh, change your cover to smth more nice looking, I'd probably ignore it if I saw it on a feature

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good novel . the story is goog and the character also

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vallen_32
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dude istg this is the best novel I have read , I can't imagine how good it will be in the coming years , it's sad that it won't gain much traction because of the " novels extra and acadamy genre " and wont reach every one except who are brain rotted for these extra / acdamy mid novels section because I personally believed it deserves far more recognition ,like an anime or a movie ,that the kind of masterpiece this is.

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good !!! but new chapter rarely !!! l

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Error_Error_1575
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it was an amazing read. it has peak level potential, same level as the author's pov. amazing writing too with only a few grammar mistakes. sadly there are not many chapters but it's worth waiting. btw the cover is a bit devastating man.

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This book deserves so much more love man honestly.This author is incredibly talented and I love the power system characters backgrounds world building.Mannnnnn Just a 5/5 10/10 one of my favourite novels iv been letting it stack for a while and now imma finna dive in

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