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Heisenberg4k
Heisenberg4kLv141yr
2023-08-08 02:41

I read the synopsis and thought that not too good... but I read your message that you will not drop it. So I thought why not give this guy a try.Let's see how it goes and if he/she will stay true to his/her words (though I don't have much hope)

Unscientific Asgardian of Marvel

Daddy_strikes_
4.5
83 Chs

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Mattex97
Mattex97Lv14

Author bro have the Mc attack the red room and take the widows as his girls and give them abilities so he'd have a sexy super soldier harem

2yr

GHOST09
GHOST09Lv4

I have only read 3 chaps but from what I have read the story is extremely fast paced, mc after transmigration just accepted it like it's normal and got straight to planning he didn't even feel some emotions about leaving his old world, mc also just revealed his powers because of the memories of the original body I don't have a problem with this it's just that he didn't even hesitate to reveal it he could have just given it like a day or two to reveal his power so that he can plan properly

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Fuehrer
FuehrerLv3

Good story here man, but I must say that Yuri in the harem is actually NTR.. So I'm just gonna give you only 3 and half Star because of it (Sorry, ig?). Didn't mean to offend you or what, but I just doesn't understand why you have to add Yuri between the MC's girls. Is that your preference or something?? Cough* You don't have to answer me tho, cuz I don't really wanna know, and I have to respect your things..

1yr
Sabyasachi93
Sabyasachi93Lv1

Interesting plotline.. Can become a very good story. Some may not like it but follow your own script. But try for a little more background development. Also don't give characters "S" class powers from normal animals.

2yr
Pekokopiko
PekokopikoLv13

pretty interesting story, the writing is decent and so does the update schedule. pity it's a Yuri, better a single pairing than including a Yuri lol, but meh I ain't gonna continue the story anyway

1yr
Daddy_strikes_
Daddy_strikes_Author

As an author it is my responsibility to give 5 stars. So go ahead and read this masterpiece. I won't say much _/+_"+/&) 0() () &6₹5#53638608😍4😎37348-0(0(+8&+₹&#-#'nlnlkgifisfljkmljofofifohpjjppjjpjphojdgsdhgxcilvieykdylfc😤😭s7ed51₹7_76#&+'! Kvk.

2yr
imSIGMA
imSIGMALv10

it's alright with a few problems here and there but good to read . i just came from reading your other novels .

1yr
Alef_Biersack
Alef_BiersackLv2

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Oleg_Nikitin
Oleg_NikitinLv1

Просто кайф. Пусть особого смысла нет, зато ощущения драйва хоть отбавляй. Несмотря на то, что сюжет довольно простой и линейный, как по мне, он соответствует тому, чего ожидаешь, читая подобные работы спасибо за Ваш труд.

1yr
Daoist3tZIRb
Daoist3tZIRbLv1

Razoável, até que é bom se for comparar a outras, acho que podia ter um desenvolvimento mais interessante da história já que foi um pouco rachada, mas está bom.

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