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Fuehrer
FuehrerLv31yr
2023-05-25 03:36

Good story here man, but I must say that Yuri in the harem is actually NTR.. So I'm just gonna give you only 3 and half Star because of it (Sorry, ig?). Didn't mean to offend you or what, but I just doesn't understand why you have to add Yuri between the MC's girls. Is that your preference or something?? Cough* You don't have to answer me tho, cuz I don't really wanna know, and I have to respect your things..

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Daddy_strikes_
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TaoistOfFreedom_
TaoistOfFreedom_Lv2

I don't think yuri among harem women is NTR, even more so if it's during the sexual act.

1yr
Fuehrer
FuehrerLv3

Yuri among the Harem is basically like the concept of allowing your womans to cheat on you, and even worse in front of you.. And you ignored/accepted it as if it were an ordinary day. I don't really know what to call it other than NTR lovers or in the specific words, mental disorders.. I'm sorry but I've to say that.

1yr
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mastermanking
mastermankingLv4

agreed

Fuehrer:Yuri among the Harem is basically like the concept of allowing your womans to cheat on you, and even worse in front of you.. And you ignored/accepted it as if it were an ordinary day. I don't really know what to call it other than NTR lovers or in the specific words, mental disorders.. I'm sorry but I've to say that.
1yr
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Phoenix_King97
Phoenix_King97Lv3

I don't agree, if my girls want to have some fun with each other than that's fine especially if I'm currently busy doing something and can't give them the attention they need and besides a harem would only work if all the girls can get along and if they are screwing each other than they're getting along, as long as they don't go for another man and I can join in their fun then it's not NTR

Fuehrer:Yuri among the Harem is basically like the concept of allowing your womans to cheat on you, and even worse in front of you.. And you ignored/accepted it as if it were an ordinary day. I don't really know what to call it other than NTR lovers or in the specific words, mental disorders.. I'm sorry but I've to say that.
1yr
Fuehrer
FuehrerLv3

It's up to you to have an opinion. But in my opinion, if I were faced with a situation like that (like being so busy that I don't have time for love), then I would never make a harem, because let's be a little more realistic here, as we know a harem requires "power", if you don't even have time for them, then why would you create something as troublesome as a harem. therefore, I'm better off having a partner, at least I won't have the mental burden by seeing my girls making out with each other behind my back, and also at least they have more freedom when they are become my partners rather than being part of a harem

Phoenix_King97:I don't agree, if my girls want to have some fun with each other than that's fine especially if I'm currently busy doing something and can't give them the attention they need and besides a harem would only work if all the girls can get along and if they are screwing each other than they're getting along, as long as they don't go for another man and I can join in their fun then it's not NTR
1yr
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Melshan
MelshanLv7

I completely agree with you, Yuri is NTR.

10mth
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Mattex97
Mattex97Lv14

Author bro have the Mc attack the red room and take the widows as his girls and give them abilities so he'd have a sexy super soldier harem

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GHOST09
GHOST09Lv4

I have only read 3 chaps but from what I have read the story is extremely fast paced, mc after transmigration just accepted it like it's normal and got straight to planning he didn't even feel some emotions about leaving his old world, mc also just revealed his powers because of the memories of the original body I don't have a problem with this it's just that he didn't even hesitate to reveal it he could have just given it like a day or two to reveal his power so that he can plan properly

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Sabyasachi93
Sabyasachi93Lv1

Interesting plotline.. Can become a very good story. Some may not like it but follow your own script. But try for a little more background development. Also don't give characters "S" class powers from normal animals.

2yr
Pekokopiko
PekokopikoLv13

pretty interesting story, the writing is decent and so does the update schedule. pity it's a Yuri, better a single pairing than including a Yuri lol, but meh I ain't gonna continue the story anyway

1yr
Daddy_strikes_
Daddy_strikes_Author

As an author it is my responsibility to give 5 stars. So go ahead and read this masterpiece. I won't say much _/+_"+/&) 0() () &6₹5#53638608😍4😎37348-0(0(+8&+₹&#-#'nlnlkgifisfljkmljofofifohpjjppjjpjphojdgsdhgxcilvieykdylfc😤😭s7ed51₹7_76#&+'! Kvk.

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imSIGMA
imSIGMALv10

it's alright with a few problems here and there but good to read . i just came from reading your other novels .

1yr
Alef_Biersack
Alef_BiersackLv2

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Oleg_Nikitin
Oleg_NikitinLv1

Просто кайф. Пусть особого смысла нет, зато ощущения драйва хоть отбавляй. Несмотря на то, что сюжет довольно простой и линейный, как по мне, он соответствует тому, чего ожидаешь, читая подобные работы спасибо за Ваш труд.

1yr
Daoist3tZIRb
Daoist3tZIRbLv1

Razoável, até que é bom se for comparar a outras, acho que podia ter um desenvolvimento mais interessante da história já que foi um pouco rachada, mas está bom.

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