webnovel
Hawkeye_07
Hawkeye_07Lv151yr
2023-07-01 02:23

let's get the bad thing out of the way: the translation was, very likely, made by a translation program, it's not totally bad but it could be a lot better soooo... yeah... that will put off alot of people.The story itself is good, not great but pretty solid (i'm on chapter 187, as of writting), the system is actually kinda of interesting tbh, you can say it's a symbiote system, the better he trains the soldiers under is the command, and the more they develop, the more points the MC get to use in the store and the more he develops himself. The MC can be called OP, but that is so far, in his parte of the country, the system goes from power lvl 1 to 100( 100 being apex special forces) and it tells him there are people at 100 in the world, of course the system gives him the uper hand with the skills he can unlock, where special forces op need 20 years to get the skills he as in the chapter i am, 187, he was given the ones he as as a system gift and he then invested point to make the better, but to do that he had to train alot of soldiers so it isn't easy for him to get the skills, and if he does a bad job at it and doesn't get anything.The characters are interesting and the "why" of things being the way they are are explain as the story goes forward.To sum it up: decent story but not for every one.

Liked by 2 people

LIKE
empty img

No replies. Be the first!

Other Reviews
FrankBon213
FrankBon213Lv5
pPOOR_GUYy
pPOOR_GUYyLv4

im thinking of something special for this one, Third battle scene The battlefield was like nothing the world had ever seen before. The armies were not made up of men and women, but of machines. On one side stood the army of the United States, their machines towering over the battlefield like giants. They were the creators of the most advanced technology in the world, and they had come to defend their homeland. On the other side stood the army of the enemy, their machines just as fearsome and deadly. They had come to conquer, to take what was not theirs and destroy anything in their way. The machines clashed, their weapons firing with deafening roars. The ground shook beneath their feet as they charged forward, the air filled with the sound of grinding metal and the stench of burning oil. The leader of the enemy army, General Yuan, watched from a distance as the battle raged on. He knew that the odds were not in his favor, but he refused to give up. He had promised his people that he would conquer the United States, and he would not let them down. As he watched the battle, he noticed a machine unlike any other. It was piloted by a lone figure, a man known only as the Maverick. The machine moved with a grace and speed that General Yuan had never seen before, its weapons striking with deadly accuracy. General Yuan knew that he had to act fast. He ordered his own machine to attack the Maverick, hoping to take down the United States' greatest weapon. The two machines clashed, their weapons firing with blinding speed. The Maverick fought with all his might, dodging and weaving around enemy attacks, his own weapons striking with deadly precision. But General Yuan was not so easily defeated. He was a skilled pilot, his machine larger and more powerful than any other. He fought with a ferocity that matched the Maverick's, his own weapons striking with deadly accuracy. In the end, it was the Maverick who emerged victorious. With a final blow, he struck down General Yuan's machine, its destruction sending shockwaves across the battlefield. As the battle raged on around them, the Maverick and General Yuan faced each other. For a moment, there was silence. "I may have lost this battle," General Yuan said, his voice filled with defeat. "But the war is not over. We will return, and we will conquer." The Maverick looked at him, a look of sadness in his eyes. "I hope not," he said. "I hope that one day, we can live in a world without war. A world where machines are not used to destroy, but to create." The battle was won, but at a heavy cost. Both sides had lost many brave soldiers and machines in the fight, and the scars of the battle would remain for years to come. But perhaps, as the Maverick had hoped, there would come a day when machines could be used for good, and the horrors of war could be left behind.

Related Stories

Rise To Stardom

Orphaned in the old world after taking care of his irresponsible and sick mother for years on end, Kyle finds his life turned upside down. His already dim world turns even gloomier and coupled with his trauma from losing her, Kyle felt like he had lost his purpose in life. Living day by day, akin to a soulless puppet, he struggled to keep his suicidal thoughts in check, all whilst trying to make ends meet as a cabbie. During those dark times, Kyle slowly begins to find solace in the world of music and movies. Even though it had always been there, it truly became something as a bloodline of sorts for him because, individually, both pieces of media, transported him to another world, one where he could feel happy, if even for a fleeting moment. And, as if the universe wanted even more for him, Kyle met some lovely old people, all of whom treated him as the son they never had, making him feel like he had a family after so long. This eventually, helped him let go of his trauma and turned him into the lovely soul he was always meant to be. But as fate would have it, these same people, wanted for Kyle to pursue his dreams because they saw the potential for greatness in him and the wonderous things he could go on to do, even if Kyle himself was oblivious to it. So, in an effort to make his dreams come true, they ended up gifting him a brand new chance, one that Kyle himself would only go on to realize after his untimely death in a fatal car accident. Now awake in the new world, still orphaned but with a brighter perspective on life, Kyle, armed with a System, another gift from his loved ones in the previous world, decides to take the chance to pursue his dreams of being a star, one that he was unable to pursue in his previous life due to his lack of talent. This is the story of a man who will go on to become the most versatile and renowned superstar all over the world... and it starts, just as he takes his first step into the cutthroat world of fame and fortune by registering for the popular singing reality TV competition, 'Rising Voices'. Known to be a fiercely competitive TV show, Kyle will meet with top contestants from around the world, go up against them, level up and become better, and ultimately, battle with them for the number one spot in the show as a dark horse! --- |AUTHOR NOTE| Just wanted to make it clear, that the singing competition which will be the first arc of the novel, will end around the late twenty-ish or early thirty-ish chapters. After that, you can expect so much more from the story so look forward to it! Also, although the setting is in a parallel world, all the songs, scripts and movies (although I will draw inspiration here and there), will be originals penned by yours truly (-‿◦).

Caeruleum_ · Urban
4.5
193 Chs