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Mustard555
Mustard555Lv21yr
2023-06-14 20:17

Changing my review from 3 stars to 5 stars. The start of this fiction was too rough and the MC is one of the most hated characters from the start and many drop it due to that. Some even say they lost their brain cells and MC is idi#t. To them- Don't say that without reading the vol3. Do you know what character development is? Trust me, the character development of MC and the other characters around him is insane. I love the depth of the characters and the growth beyond what you often find in your regular fan fiction. You want a good story to read, this is it. Slow burn that rewards you in just perfect time.

MY HAREM IN DC & MARVEL MULTIVERSE

Xcalibur_Xc
4.8
201 Chs

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Xcalibur_Xc
Xcalibur_XcAuthor

Thank you. GG> You are right, I don't know how many times readers say MC is stupid and an idiot and they lost their brain cells. Some even trolls without reading or understanding. I am glad that you like it.

1yr
Monarch_Lord
Monarch_LordLv3

So you're telling us to read over 100 chapters? witnessing the adventure of an idiot for almost 100 chapters!? Most of us don't got the patience like you bro .-.

1yr
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Mustard555
Mustard555Lv2

I could care less about some casual readers jumping from one fic to another and I never told anyone to read over 100 chs. The first vol is just a setup for the bigger picture. And what makes you think MC is an idiot? It's like you are the dumb one for failing to see the character development. He was a regular civilian from the start. Anyway, open the last chapter and ask anyone lol how good this fic is.

Monarch_Lord:So you're telling us to read over 100 chapters? witnessing the adventure of an idiot for almost 100 chapters!? Most of us don't got the patience like you bro .-.
1yr
Gonzalo_Pereira_6949
Gonzalo_Pereira_6949Lv1

You are literaly saying that people should not comment about the subject unless they have read up to volume 3. So, while you may not be asking people to read 100 chapters, you are telling them that they need to spend a lot of time reading it.

Mustard555:I could care less about some casual readers jumping from one fic to another and I never told anyone to read over 100 chs. The first vol is just a setup for the bigger picture. And what makes you think MC is an idiot? It's like you are the dumb one for failing to see the character development. He was a regular civilian from the start. Anyway, open the last chapter and ask anyone lol how good this fic is.
8mth
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Mustard555
Mustard555Lv2

So, you read without spending time? And I did mention character development, right? You should know that character development doesn't happen in a single chapter and so is the plot. If everything is wrapped up in 10 chs or so, what's the point of writing a book? You are reading Harry Potter Book-1 and asking how would Voldemort die.

Gonzalo_Pereira_6949:You are literaly saying that people should not comment about the subject unless they have read up to volume 3. So, while you may not be asking people to read 100 chapters, you are telling them that they need to spend a lot of time reading it.
6mth
Mustard555
Mustard555Lv2

Oh, Slow burn is already mentioned by the author. So, I don't know why impatient people read what they don't like and complain endlessly.

Gonzalo_Pereira_6949:You are literaly saying that people should not comment about the subject unless they have read up to volume 3. So, while you may not be asking people to read 100 chapters, you are telling them that they need to spend a lot of time reading it.
6mth
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Xcalibur_Xc
Xcalibur_XcAuthor

Hello there. Author here with 5 star review as always. This is my first fan fiction and English isn't my native language. So, have a little patience with me and tell me if there are any typos or mistakes. Thank you for reading...

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Chaos_Order8
Chaos_Order8Lv5

Until ch 100 the FF is still good. Nothing to complain about. The MC is good and all. The FL have good characters and are interesting not F*** Dolls. I do want see more action. And the new wallpaper is hot 🔥😍 Rouge if iam not wrong.

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Disturbing_Reality
Disturbing_RealityLv4

I loved this fic the slow burn theme actually helped it develop so much I would recommend everyone reading this review to try it out but there's just one tiny problem WHERE'S PART 2?! I'm waiting for it's:

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SUBSCRIBE_MY_LIST
SUBSCRIBE_MY_LISTLv5

The concept is nice but the story itself has too fast, random chaotic pacing to be easy to follow. It reads a bit like an MTL in writing quality too with wuxia typical situations. As the story progresses the pacing becomes faster and faster too. His sister who in the first 15 chapters is referred to in a way that it seems to be a little sister, turns out to not be all that little as the story suddenly takes an 18+ twist with her when shopping. Which is kinda awkward because you then realise that is was a language issue that caused the assumption that she was atleast 10 years younger untill that point that things take such a turn.... So yeah, on the whole, the concept is fun, but the story itself could do with some better pacing and more natural grammar in English.

2yr
Surzaw
SurzawLv13

So far im about 46 Chapters in and im really enjoying things. The writing quality is good so if you’re heavy on that its not a problem. Also I think the author did a good job integrating the Marvel and Dc worlds together.

1yr
O_Mysery
O_MyseryLv2

I like how the author introduced some forgotten powers like void from Marvel and weapon master from DC while keeping it balanced as the fic's name. You have my praise for showing the dark side of the war instead of flashy fights that ignores the damage and deaths regular civilians suffer while the heroes go home safe and sound. And obviously, the s*xual contents are well written. Dialogues can be improved further. Overall an interesting concept depicting the daily life of a civilian MC struggling with his new power.

2yr
DIRTYBALL69
DIRTYBALL69Lv11

so far not a bad read only complaint is i feel the mc has a bad attitude towards literally everything so far hopefully that gets better later in story but all round not a bad read

2yr
SLevel1_Sl1
SLevel1_Sl1Lv1

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Psan
PsanLv6

quoute "It's an êrôge-focused story that isn't focused on serious stuff".... ME: Reads the problems that mc will face.. "The one who laughs"... how this is not serious lol?

1yr
Xcalibur_Xc
Xcalibur_XcAuthor

I think I have mentioned what to expect from this fic in the fic description and in the first chapter. I also do public polls for the READERS OF CULTURES and then I decide what to focus on. Even then, some retards are spamming fake reviews and comments randomly without any explanations. THOSE BRAINLESS COMMENTS AND REVIEWS WILL BE DELETED>

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