Hello there. Author here with 5 star review as always. This is my first fan fiction and English isn't my native language. So, have a little patience with me and tell me if there are any typos or mistakes. Thank you for reading...

Until ch 100 the FF is still good. Nothing to complain about. The MC is good and all. The FL have good characters and are interesting not F*** Dolls. I do want see more action. And the new wallpaper is hot 🔥😍 Rouge if iam not wrong.

I loved this fic the slow burn theme actually helped it develop so much I would recommend everyone reading this review to try it out but there's just one tiny problem WHERE'S PART 2?! I'm waiting for it's:

The concept is nice but the story itself has too fast, random chaotic pacing to be easy to follow. It reads a bit like an MTL in writing quality too with wuxia typical situations. As the story progresses the pacing becomes faster and faster too. His sister who in the first 15 chapters is referred to in a way that it seems to be a little sister, turns out to not be all that little as the story suddenly takes an 18+ twist with her when shopping. Which is kinda awkward because you then realise that is was a language issue that caused the assumption that she was atleast 10 years younger untill that point that things take such a turn.... So yeah, on the whole, the concept is fun, but the story itself could do with some better pacing and more natural grammar in English.

So far im about 46 Chapters in and im really enjoying things. The writing quality is good so if you’re heavy on that its not a problem. Also I think the author did a good job integrating the Marvel and Dc worlds together.

I like how the author introduced some forgotten powers like void from Marvel and weapon master from DC while keeping it balanced as the fic's name. You have my praise for showing the dark side of the war instead of flashy fights that ignores the damage and deaths regular civilians suffer while the heroes go home safe and sound. And obviously, the s*xual contents are well written. Dialogues can be improved further. Overall an interesting concept depicting the daily life of a civilian MC struggling with his new power.

so far not a bad read only complaint is i feel the mc has a bad attitude towards literally everything so far hopefully that gets better later in story but all round not a bad read

Reveal spoiler

quoute "It's an êrôge-focused story that isn't focused on serious stuff".... ME: Reads the problems that mc will face.. "The one who laughs"... how this is not serious lol?

If you are a man of culture, you must read this. Good writing and I like the story line[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]