Review Detail of hero4hire in Percy Jackson : The Odyssey of a Primordial.
Review detail
Feel like author watched sandman and deiced to write about it. Its like that meme where one friend copy another friend homework but does a poor job of hiding it. Good writing, bad story/plot.
Percy Jackson : The Odyssey of a Primordial.
Eren_fraser
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hero4hire:The problem is you are just repeating the scene from sandman show word for word, especially his realm, meeting with fate etc.. This feel more like commentary/reaction about the show sandman instead of percy jackson fanfic. Anyway, my opinion is neutral as you can see from my rating, i dont hate it but i dont like it enough to continue reading either.
The problem is you are just repeating the scene from sandman show word for word, especially his realm, meeting with fate etc.. This feel more like commentary/reaction about the show sandman instead of percy jackson fanfic. Anyway, my opinion is neutral as you can see from my rating, i dont hate it but i dont like it enough to continue reading either.
Eren_fraser:Congratulations, you just described fanfiction. I obviously going to get inspiration from other works to write my story better. There is little to no nothing on Primordials in Percy Jackson.
I assumed he just copied for his initial realm, the mc is reincarnated after all, it makes sense for him to base his dream realm in something from our world, I assumed he would just change afterwards.
hero4hire:The problem is you are just repeating the scene from sandman show word for word, especially his realm, meeting with fate etc.. This feel more like commentary/reaction about the show sandman instead of percy jackson fanfic. Anyway, my opinion is neutral as you can see from my rating, i dont hate it but i dont like it enough to continue reading either.
