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okyo

Lv4

Not quite proud of posting another authors work in here hehe.

2018-12-23 JoinedUnited Kingdom
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  • okyo
    okyo9mth
    Replied to mao_zi

    that's basically people on this site. they don't care about any of the good story or grammar they only care about the fandom it's written in or the sex

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    I have become the Child Emperor
    Anime & Comics · Support_Five
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  • okyo
    okyo9mth
    Replied to mao_zi

    go ahead man no one's stopping you 😭😭

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    I have become the Child Emperor
    Anime & Comics · Support_Five
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  • okyo
    okyo9mth
    Replied to Tiamatlove

    bro read the summary next time 💀💀

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    I have become the Child Emperor
    Anime & Comics · Support_Five
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  • okyo
    okyo9mth
    Commented

    wonder if your mc will have one night stands here and there before becoming Gwen's. I mean marvel have a lot of beautiful girls maybe take a bite before committing.

    Ch 11 Natasha Romanoff
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    Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger
    Anime & Comics · _oinkchan
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  • okyo
    okyo9mth
    Replied to _oinkchan

    oh

    Ch 9 Revenge
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    Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger
    Anime & Comics · _oinkchan
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  • okyo
    okyo10mth
    Commented

    bro this chapter was so unnecessary, like I understand what ur doing but like it's so pointless. there's a difference between showing how bad a character is and then there's the thing where its just needlessly pointless

    Ch 9 Revenge
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    Spider-Verse: Creeping Hunger
    Anime & Comics · _oinkchan
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  • okyo
    okyo10mth
    Commented

    I must say this is shaping up to be slightly better than the other one. mostly because it has a faster pace than the other one, which is considerably slower. either way love them both

    Ch 24 Box Office Fluke
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    Hollywood Creed: 2nd Draft
    Celebrities · UniVerseLessOne
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  • okyo
    okyo10mth
    Commented

    tbh I feel like having home alone reach 5 movies is a bit much. People would've lost interest in it by the 3rd movie.

    Ch 16 Trajectory
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    Hollywood Creed: 2nd Draft
    Celebrities · UniVerseLessOne
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  • okyo
    okyo10mth
    Replied to EternalStud

    Winton

    This had to be some kind of dream. Yeah, that makes perfect sense. Everyone was calling me 'Jesse' and not Winston like they usually do.
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    Breaking Good Or How I learned to stop worrying and love the Blue Meth
    TV · UdayWrites
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  • okyo
    okyo11mth
    Replied to Godfire_Dragneel

    yeah it's cringe hahaha

    Salem lifted one hand up daintily a laughed lightly in amusement, "Defiance, how nostalgic," she tittered, before her lips pulled up in a more teasing fashion, "But don't lie dear boy. I felt your lust for me the moment you laid eyes upon my body. You may be a Grimm in body now, but your soul is human and you act human, and I am beautiful beyond mortal women."
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    Grimm Soul (Rwby)
    Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0
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  • okyo
    okyo11mth
    Replied to ScarletQC

    "there's at what level" maybe next time try to write something that makes sense before replying.

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    In Marvel as Superman
    Anime & Comics · DarkHelixDragoon24
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  • okyo
    okyo1yr
    Replied to DevionKing

    bruh have not been reading??????

    Zachary timed his run to perfection before pushing off the ground to leap for the ball. His 6-foot-4 physique played its role, and he outmuscled the seemingly helpless Mario Suárez for aerial superiority. And with that, he easily won the ball fair and square before using his head to guide it towards Andrea Pirlo on his left.
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    THE GREATEST OF ALL TIME
    Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
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  • okyo
    okyo1yr
    Commented

    noooo I need moreeew

    Ch 57 Rats at the Door
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    MCU: Skull and Bones
    Movies · Swarthy
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  • okyo
    okyo1yr
    Replied to hero4hire

    exactlyyyy it's just a reaction fic. absolutely pointless.

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    Percy Jackson : The Odyssey of a Primordial.
    Book&Literature · Eren_fraser
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  • okyo
    okyo1yr
    Commented

    yeah it's best if you step away from this story for now since you're getting a burnout. but hopefully once you come back you'll have the motivation ti continue

    Ch 326 Here's the thing...
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    Alexander Creed: Re-Life
    Celebrities · UniVerseLessOne
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  • okyo
    okyo1yr
    Posted

    While the story is above average in this site. the one thing that bugs me is the constant author notes, it ruins the immersion of the reader. next time put the a/n at the beginning or the end of the chapter otherwise it'll be annoying.

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    Like No One Ever Was (Self Insert/SI)
    Anime & Comics · Gtopia
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  • okyo
    okyo1yr
    Replied to SORCERERSUPREME_7

    Any idea why they are giving it bad reviews?

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    Badass Peter Parker
    Anime & Comics · UdayWrites
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  • okyo
    okyo1yr
    Commented

    all cool man take your time

    Ch 320 I messed up...
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    Alexander Creed: Re-Life
    Celebrities · UniVerseLessOne
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  • okyo
    okyo1yr
    Commented

    dang bro thought u were about to quit

    Ch 308 Sorry...
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    Alexander Creed: Re-Life
    Celebrities · UniVerseLessOne
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  • okyo
    okyo1yr
    Replied to SujetoXVII

    bro I did not understand what you were trying to convey with that sentence

    He fell into a deep depression, ignoring the pleas of the people closest to him, turning to alcohol to drown his pain. He refused to believe he couldn't fight anymore but his aching knee and constant limp were a perpetual reminder. A reminder of his humanity. A reminder of how weak he truly was. No matter how many times the people around you toot your horn, calling you invincible, all it took was an injury to tell you otherwise.
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    Athos Apsifoun : The Son Of Herakles
    Book&Literature · Marine0IQ
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